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Concept Alien (CCM261) Please Critique

Hello,
I decided to model a character from my first assignment in Concept Design class, with hopes of using him in my demo reel. Looking for critiques, very much appreciated.
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I'm still trying to decide on a way of attaching the two Hydrogen Tanks to his armor shell. I want it to be some sort of sturdy metal latch, yet loose that it can shift around as he moves, and can also be easily attached and removed by the wearer. If you have an idea I'd love to hear it, if you could draw me a picture that'd be even better!

I realized as I was readying these pictures that I almost completely forgot about his back claws which, while drawing the concepts, were his main feature!

Here's my original concept page;
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