Two small children -cartoon-

Belias

I'm doing these as a job, WIP
please crit them



for fun, first retarded zombies version

http://www.qemum.org/Cop_15.png

ErichWK

I think this is in the wrong forum...

Belias

ouch, yes, i will report it so they move it...
ps: anyways, what do you think?

MM

to begin with, i think the boy's pants are too short and the left foot looks like the right foot and both of them look shocked or too surprised and the trees look like cotton candy.

eld

this thread will go down in history.

Zipfinator

Is that giant cotton candy Green Apple flavored or Asparagus?

Belias

shotgun

makecg

LOL

tristamus

shotgun wrote: »

Indeed.


And that's my most favorite GIF ever.

Stinger88

its mesmerizing.........

rooster

How much for the little girl..
The women, how much for the women!?

Belias

the girl has no ankles

fixed that area...

yes, this update is a bit good enough I think




they no longer look surprised!

MM

the pants look still too short.

Belias

the pants look still too short.

tnx, any more comments guys?

Cexar

What's the poly count on them?

Belias

What's the poly count on them?

they are not for games.

Belias

before I show this to my employer, give me comments please.

Tom3D

The female character looks too shiny, her arms look rather thin and her feet look a bit short. The male character appears to be wearing a uniform which doesn't come across as child like. His belt buckle looks slightly flat as does his face. Hope this helps.

koufuyo

Idk, they seem kinda creepy to me...
Perhaps do more with the eyes your know?
Give'em that sparkle

Cap Hotkill

The Girl is Okeish, but the boy needs a massive face redone, he looks like Pedro from Heidi but made out of unfitting pieces.

uncle

Also - post wires. You want them to animate nicely, don't you?