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Street Girl

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stickadtroja polycounter lvl 11
So here's a personal project of mine. I wanted to make a female character, and tried to get the trashy, hard look of someone living in a ghetto or big city.

Would really appreciate some feedback and crits!

peace y'all!

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  • jmt
    The face doesn't look feminine to me. I'm not saying that you have to make her into a supermodel, but when I look at that face, I don't really see a girl.

    The lips seem way too botox duck face.

    Her clothes could be dirtier, faded, ripped etc.

    I like the choice of clothing.
  • Del
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    Del polycounter lvl 9
    ~ Looks cool man. Not sure that topology would really work though.

    I'd also grab the eyes and lower them on the face.

    Keep rocking :)
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