Rifle WIP

nightshade

this is my first time actually posting my work here! anyway, here's a rifle I've been working on today. I'm gonna try and go as far as i can with this. any pointers/paintovers/others stuff you guys feel like doing would be great. loosely based on the middle concept

nightshade

here's an update.

Addieo

Some weird shading around the handle and that front lower panel which needs sorting out. Although the detail is good, it looks a bit sparse in some areas.

MoreDread

its a good start...
the smooth parts like the grip look odd tho.
theres some weird pinched line around the hole for the thumb and overall the surface in that area is kinda wonky.
try to make it more uniform.

Cheese_Shinobi

Great start!
The top of the gun looks best, the lower is a bit too smooth at the moment.
Perhaps you could divide the rifle into more separate parts to work with?

Keep up the good work!

nightshade

more progress. i know the cap of the fore grip is wonky, and the wires around the holes are crazy, I'm gonna fix them tomorrow. time for bed.

megalmn2000

Some part of the gun looks melty like the front and the handle part. I think there's also a smoothing problem with the crosshair on the top.

Cooljay

I'm seeing ngons and triangles in places hence the bumpiness that gives off in lighting. Always check for them as much as possible. In some cases try using average vertices and harden edges where it needs to be.