Head WIP

SnaFuBAR

Well, I'm not getting any replies to this in the waywo thread, so I thought I'd show it here. Crits are very much appreciated right now.

http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/2306/39848853.jpg
http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/9297/36280965.jpg
http://img685.imageshack.us/img685/3756/19228861.jpg

SnaFuBAR

Really, guys? Nothing?

MoreDread

haha do i know the feeling.

it looks pretty good, topology seems ok

the eyes are opened a little too wide, the chinline is a bit too round.

a side view would be nice. and maybe a perspective shot without the wireframe.

and .. your pics are kinda dark, are you using blender? i am and screengrabs always come out way darker than what i'm actually seeing when modeling stuff so i adjust lightness and contrast a little before posting the pics.

Memory

agree with MoreDread. Some better shots would be easier to critique. Are you planning on taking this into zbrush or...what direction are you headed? The loops do seem ok, but I would like a better look at the model, something about the lips/corner of the lips seems off...

SnaFuBAR

I will be taking this into mudbox after making some adjustments here and there and taking critique. It will end up at game res. It's all quads, and I did this in max 2010. I gotta say, modeling ears is kind of a bitch.

I'll get some better shots for you guys.

MM

what ethnicity are you going for?
facial anatomy varies according to that.

in general, the lips are lacking depth right now. the inside of the lips should go deeper.
the shape of the eye lids usually have more curvature, your look to plain. also the corners of the lips usually are pushed in deeper.

SnaFuBAR

So, here's a couple of screens for you all. Isometric with topology, perspective without it, and one with a MICH combat helmet. I'm also just going for a general base I could hopefully quickly edit, rather than any one race.