[FIGHTER] Battle Arena Toshinden, FO FAI, Japhir

Japhir

So I've decided to join in after all!
I used to play Battle Arena Toshinden with my neighbours when I was little, and my favourite character of that game was Fo Fai. So i'm gonna do something with him. Not sure on the redesign yet, but after painting for a while a really norse theme might fit him, in stead of his original clean Chinese outfit. I'm also considering making him even older.
Here's the original character:

and here is a video of both my favourite characters of this game in action: [ame]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0Or1hawe0rg&feature=related[/ame]
Here's my concept art so far:


Crits and comments are most appreciated, since I normally sort of skip the concepting phase.

Japhir

Moar:

beta_channel

It doesn't really look like a redesign of the character to me, just a clothing swap. How about a younger version of him...when he was young and reckless...could only make a small blue ball to roll on...was a looker for the ladies, maybe a bit of a bad boy. Or the silent brooding type. Maybe only used 1 claw instead of 2. Carried a big ass gauntlet in the other hand. Or used two big ass single claws, but age has made him weak and he had to go for the lighter, faster blades. Eh, my 2cents.

Japhir

Yeah you're right. I first wanted to get a feel for him (and for drawing in general, haven't drawn anything in ages) and then try to re-imagine him.

I'm not really sure, but here's a quick experiment. What if after all those years he had enough of his healthy lifestyle and became really FAT:


I also thought about making him look very evil. Because normally he is evil, but looks rather good imo. But i still need to try this out.

Any ideas?

Japhir

I did some more sketches to get ideas, this isn't particularly original but i'm trying to feel the character first. Maybe I'll turn him into a gardener :P.



PS: i like working in low rez, it makes me feel like i'm working on a 128 texture which i can control .

EDIT:
Damn i liked the idea of a gardener Fo, so here is the same sketch but gardenerified.

Japhir

Sooo, any feedback before I start modeling? I don't feel like painting out a more elaborate concept. I'm going for the gardener Fo.

WipEout

Give him a sunhat and dirty knees (or knee pads). I like the idea of a gardener Fo, but it just feels really simple right now-- do you plan on accessorizing him much?