[W.I.P] RK-MP121

Rock Bottom

Hey guys..... was working on a small SMG for a small demo game i am working on with some friends..... C&C are welcome thanks









Oh and the design is mine..... i was not straying for perfect mechanics.... i wanted something funky for the game.... C&C are welcome thanks

Kiser Designs

First thing that stuck out to me was the area behind the grip. It seems out of place


I would rethink that part, it dosnt link together well and seems just thrown on. Also the angle on the front of the trigger guard is very sharp and seems weird.
Can you post wires? I know you said this is your own design, but what are you using for reference? The proportions towards the front of the weapon seem off.

Norron

The reversed magazine looks really odd to me. I don't think I've ever seen a real weapon that has a magazine with an angle like that and it's making the whole gun look fake.

Rock Bottom

hey.... here is my Reference.... i have no drawing pad so the proportions ARE off... so i tryed to fix them by eye...


will post wires on my next update thanks for the crits.... i was not very happy with the aim on the barrel...

Cooljay

Try to use some real life reference when modeling non existent weapons or to get realistic looks. I'd say try modeling the grip similar to an MP9

Mr-Jigsaw

The straight magazine from the reference looks a lot better than the reversed MP5 mag. You could also add some detail to the receiver by making the safety ambidexterous and adding some fencing at the edge of the magazine well.

But there is one weird issue with your design: the chamber, as depicted by the AK-styled ejection port and bolt handle, is way above the barrel. You'll need to either raise the barrel or lower the ejection port. Sure, it could work like that if the ejection port is simply high, but it'd be a waste of space(seeing your design lacks a gas tube, it's only the ejection port keeping the whole top half of the gun there, it'd be full of empty space) and probably throw brass pretty far, liable to peg your own guys to the side of you.

Rock Bottom

Hey guys.... here is a little update....

















C&C Are welcome... i did consider all the C&C given to me before... so this is what i changed... i am still fixing the aim.... i am making a EOTECH aim for the weapon and see how that fairs out.... any more C&C are welcome thanks guys oh and sorry for the yellow lines on the side if the images... :poly122:

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Any comments??

iuli4n

the magazine looks like it should be a bit bigger in thickness. like the slot in which it enters is way bigger than the magazine. sorry but english isn't my first language.