Dwarf warrior / engineer

Dunkan

A hey to everyone,

As you might see this is my first post and project in this Forum.
Just short this project is going to be a highpoly render and hopefully a game character in the end.
This is the first sculpt of the head, still need a level of detail, but it will be postet soon.

Critic is more that welcome, thx.

Dunkan

Hello there again,

Just a quick update, still working around the smaller detailes. Have just made a smaller PS paintover. Hope you like it.

bbob

Hullo and welcome

Did a wee paintover:


Aside from those, you might want to go in and sharpen up creases and such, the low frequency stuff still looks a bit blobby.

However I do think it will help to see him with beard and bushy brows.

Keep on truckin'

duxun

i agree with the critique below... his mouth would deform like he is describing.

great model keep it up !!

Dunkan

Update

Ey bbob and duxun, thanks for the citique, it was very helpfull.

Hope your all like the new render, the next step on the model is some armor, and some gadgets. The beard on him will first be made when i have the upper body-armor done. A paintover will be done later.
Does have some small changes to him his normal map, have some small mapping errors, nothing huge.

The concept i have made will also be postet later. (Some mix off WoW and Warhammer stuff.)

As always critique is always welcome.

JustinPunio

I like the lighting in the render ...the anatomy needs some tweaking, the caruncula part is too large and the top lip is too thin, but this just subjective

Stromberg90

Looks cool, both close the mouth more.

Neo_God

All in all it's looking good, the render is certainly pretty. However, the eyes are looking strange, the skin isn't hugging the eyeball enough and it is making it look like someone wearing a well made dwarf Halloween mask. I think you just need to pull the skin in tighter around the eyeball. I did a quick mock-up in case you didn't know what I was talking about.