Looking pretty sweet so far. The only things I'd suggest at the moment are to maybe flatten out her forehead a touch so you don't have that dip in the middle and maybe loosen up her shirt a little so you can get some wrinkles and some material stretching between prominent areas like her clavicles and boobs.
Just getting all the pieces together at the moment then I am going to jump back into sculpting.
@Swizzle: Good call thanks, I will be getting the wrinkles going for sure. The dip in the forehead is just leftover from sculptris same as the triangles on the back of the head. I need to go over the body and fix all those little shitty things soon I hope. Thanks again.
Added a Spider backpack.
and here is a shitty paintover of where I would like to go with her.
ahaha I love the backpack Very cool idea!! I really like the shirt and the skirt ^____^
I think the hair suck ass tho T_T Design wise its a bit weird, maybe have her wear a less wide Mohawk or something, or just something totally different, it feel too out of place right now, like a TOUPET! or whatever the english term...
@b1ll: Thanks. I know what you mean it sort of looks like she has a towel wrapped around her wet hair. Mohawk could be a really cool idea.
I hope that if I add smaller strands to break up the harsh transition of the hair line as well as just sculpt the hair properly it will help, but if it does not I will have to change it. Thanks for the feedback and the kind words.
Maybe even just lift the hairline a little, something like this.
man, you seriously have some skills this has so much style its unbelievable hope you can keep it looking amazing when you start applying some texture good luck
I am working on the headphones at the moment but thought I would post some kind of hair fix still needs more work but I like it a lot more than the previous version.
That backpacks sooo cooool Headphones round the neck might look cool, would definetly help the silhouette. You could go piercing crazy on her ears too.
I tried to put the headphones around her neck but then it just killed the spider backpack hmmmmmmmmm. I will give it another go. Thanks for the feedback guys
Here is an update on the headphones while I am at it.
Lookin' sweet! I don't love the headphones around the neck, but I understand why you went that direction. I really liked how the cords curved and framed her face initially. I prefer the silhouette with them on her head with some adjustments. Perhaps a different style of headphone that brings the band closer to her head.
The hair is definitely looking better and has a nice overall shape now. The style is awesome overall.
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Rough concept:
Into Z-Brush
Some extra business:
Where I am so far: I am going to add a few extra bits and pieces, Then I can get back into sculpting
The simple view:
becasue it does.
i dig the style dude, hope to see her finished
I'm really like the hair and skirt.
Just getting all the pieces together at the moment then I am going to jump back into sculpting.
@Swizzle: Good call thanks, I will be getting the wrinkles going for sure. The dip in the forehead is just leftover from sculptris same as the triangles on the back of the head. I need to go over the body and fix all those little shitty things soon I hope. Thanks again.
Added a Spider backpack.
and here is a shitty paintover of where I would like to go with her.
I think the hair suck ass tho T_T Design wise its a bit weird, maybe have her wear a less wide Mohawk or something, or just something totally different, it feel too out of place right now, like a TOUPET! or whatever the english term...
Anyway thats just me complaining.
But otherwise i cant wait to see how it end up!
I hope that if I add smaller strands to break up the harsh transition of the hair line as well as just sculpt the hair properly it will help, but if it does not I will have to change it. Thanks for the feedback and the kind words.
Maybe even just lift the hairline a little, something like this.
really nice Duncan, suits your chibi style but stands on its own as well.
are you going to make the full body or just the bust you have now?
The Spider back pack is completely sick , great idea/implementation.
I am working on the headphones at the moment but thought I would post some kind of hair fix still needs more work but I like it a lot more than the previous version.
Well here is another update, Started the Headphones. Not sure if they really work yet but we will just have to wait and see.
Also I would like to add my name to the list of people pointing out that this is awesome.
I tried to put the headphones around her neck but then it just killed the spider backpack hmmmmmmmmm. I will give it another go. Thanks for the feedback guys
Here is an update on the headphones while I am at it.
Thanks again guys
They still need soooo much work but they are in there.
The hair is definitely looking better and has a nice overall shape now. The style is awesome overall.
good to see you updatin man ^^