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Telescope Scene -udk

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  • Rhoutermans
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    Rhoutermans polycounter lvl 12
    Cheers Jess ;)
    Added some round shapes to the room and a library section.. telescope3.jpg

    The red checkers will be red carpet;
    telescope2.jpg
    telescopeq.jpg

    Suggestions are always welcome
  • Rhoutermans
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    Rhoutermans polycounter lvl 12
    decided to work on the librairy a bit

    telescope.jpg

    Any cool ideas I should add in are welcome :)
  • WetWired
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    Just my opinion so take it with a grain of salt but I feel like the telescope needs to be raised slightly and the ceiling in the surrounding room could tier up towards to dome a bit. Kind of like concentric rings of ceiling leading up to the dome. Giving you a clear shot of the scope and even a little view out the dome from there.

    The 2nd last shot looking the stairs for example, the view feels a little flat and even though it's not the telescope looks slightly sunken. Also the pillar their is obscuring the view of the scope.

    I'm liking it so far though.
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