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Jacecr
Sep 2010
As in my shack posting I don't know how to improve this model.I would love to hear some advice.This is done in 3ds max and I used mental ray.
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Sep 2010
the climby net thingy looks really boxy.
Overall, I'd say the model looks okay, but you gotta post some wires so we can know for sure.
If the wires are good...I'd say you should start texturing.
Is this going into a scene? You gotta give us some more information on what to critique.
If its going to be a scene, you need more elements. Something to frame the image. A camera angle. Background elements, detail elements. A composition.
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Jacecr
Sep 2010
thanks I wasn't even aware I had replies.It would be an asset for a scene.I already know I have to many polys so I'll work on reducing that then posting the wires.
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Sep 2010
This was my reference
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Overall, I'd say the model looks okay, but you gotta post some wires so we can know for sure.
If the wires are good...I'd say you should start texturing.
Is this going into a scene? You gotta give us some more information on what to critique.
If its going to be a scene, you need more elements. Something to frame the image. A camera angle. Background elements, detail elements. A composition.