That's some great work you've got there. There are three little things I'd like to nitpick on:
A - You should rotate one of those cylinders, so they don't show the exact same part of the texture
B - That pipe doesn't seem to be connected to anything?
C - Maybe break up that straight edge like on the main pathway. I'm also not very fond of that corner right beside the C. I think I would extend the platform down.
I'm looking forward to your entry. Keep on working
Yeah they weren't kidding on that cut off. I barely got mine in!
I love the scene, the colours and lighting are really cool. Great texture work!
You're in the same boat as Paroxum, but I'm sure the admins will let you still submit your final.
Thanks guys! Hehe, a few seconds late is still late so I'm not holding my breath, but hopefully they feel a bit merciful. Either way this was a great learning experience and I'm really glad to have participated.
I really enjoyed working on the textures, maybe too much! There's still a ton of stuff I can do with this scene, so after taking a hiatus I'll probably open a new thread in P&P to keep developing it. Hopefully sometime tomorrow I'll get a video up, too.
Thanks guys, I really appreciate all the support and feedback I've gotten over the course of this competition. Special thanks to my AD Greg Foertsch for his support!
I will proudly say you got my vote for this one. I love the depth to the world you created with the vistas. There could be more variety in the foreground, but its just superbly executed.
Slum, I'm really glad you like it man. I totally agree about the foreground, hopefully variety is something I will address with continuing work on the environment.
Maze, thank you! I'm glad the style and palette are working for you, those were two of my higher priorities here.
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Tonight's update:
A - You should rotate one of those cylinders, so they don't show the exact same part of the texture
B - That pipe doesn't seem to be connected to anything?
C - Maybe break up that straight edge like on the main pathway. I'm also not very fond of that corner right beside the C. I think I would extend the platform down.
I'm looking forward to your entry. Keep on working
153,058 triangles
edit: the submissions thread literally closed while I was figuring out how to change my font size to 4.
I'm sure they will move it into the main thread for you :P
I love the scene, the colours and lighting are really cool. Great texture work!
You're in the same boat as Paroxum, but I'm sure the admins will let you still submit your final.
Good stuff!
I really enjoyed working on the textures, maybe too much! There's still a ton of stuff I can do with this scene, so after taking a hiatus I'll probably open a new thread in P&P to keep developing it. Hopefully sometime tomorrow I'll get a video up, too.
Maze, thank you! I'm glad the style and palette are working for you, those were two of my higher priorities here.