Phoenix Girl

OrganizedChaos

Hey everyone, I'm making this character for the cgtalk workshop "ZBrush - Sculpting Digital Characters with Cesar Dacol Jr"
I just wanted to post on here and get some feedback on what I've done so far. Right now I'm trying to figure out the cape and finish detailing before I start texture work. Hair is temporary too

The idea behind the character is she's an elemental that can exist in two dimensions, in her reality she's a phoenix, and in her alternate reality she's this form, part bird part human, her horns represent her status as a warrior.

EditLslight adjustments real quick

CheeseOnToast

Any chance of a bigger pic or some detail shots?
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OrganizedChaos

hopefully this is better

CheeseOnToast

Overall she's looking good, but still a bit "mushy". Your low-level, big shapes are looking good, but you need to get in and define the medium level shapes a bit more. I'm not saying that every muscle needs a sharp delineation, but a a bit more work at this level before you get into high-frequency details would go a long way. If you haven't got it already, grab the Damien Standard (aka. "Dam_Standard") brush from the main zbrush site : it's great for sharpening up creases and defining edges quickly.

edit: here it is....

http://www.zbrushcentral.com/attachment.php?attachmentid=90419

OrganizedChaos

Thanks a ton! I'll make sure I start that tonight and post the results.

Wayfa

Agreed with cheeseontoast..
Also you could check the back anatomy.. Im kinda missing some muscles there (just being picky)

OrganizedChaos

Picky is good! Thanks for pointing that out

OrganizedChaos

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XenoKratios

Awesome, could be my new dream girl. Will she have wings because that will top it.

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