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Sauron

Here i'll be posting my character WIPs
Very had critics is allways welcome!

the first character is fat angel with small wings.



also im going to make fat under his chin (don't know how to translate it right:) ) a little bit smaller, and meke some kind of clothes.

Sauron

here is an update

Luke_Starkie

Thats looking pretty immense dude. Great work

Sauron

Thanks!
continue workin' on it, added some cellulite, and made this... i don't know, a Tshirt? how do you call this cloth in english? ))

Luke_Starkie

how do you call this cloth in english?

A vest my friend
My only crit now is on the vest look at the straps and the bit near his boobs, and compare it with this picture.
Still awesome work !

Sauron

oh, thanks! i made them like on traditional USSR, old, stretched vest but i'll try to make them more realistic)

Sauron

Ok, here is a new one

Sauron

and here goes his sport shorts, also made in USSR ^__________^

SHEPEIRO

nice like this,

Sauron

Thanks!)
I'm going to add some planes with alpha on my lowpoly to make feather.

Luke_Starkie

Looking really sweet man !

butt_sahib

Hehe he is looking pretty nice. Obese models are a pain in the butt
I would have liked it mroe if the dude was influenced my the wings posture-wise. Like maybe he should he hanging off of them,hunched with arms hanging down. WHat i mean is, atm, in my honest opinion, he looks like a fat guy with his leg in flexion with two wings on his back

Sauron

Luke_starkie, thanks!
Butt_Saahib, Yes, i understand and will try to show it in his final pose!

still need more hard crit and tips!

d00kie

teehee. i love those arms. I like the larger gullet/chin you had in the first post as opposed to the smaller chin. It gave his face a little more character it seemed.

Sauron

D00kie, thanks! but when i gave the first image to my friends nobody liked that gullet, so i decided to move it off

killingpeople

having holes in the geometry for his eye sockets is a bad choice.

Sauron

Killingpeople, yes, there is also a hole in the mouth, but what problem can they make?

killingpeople

from my experience, sculpting near open faces like that is difficult. a smooth will cause the opening to widen. if there is a way around it and you prefer it, then by all means.

Slash

nothing like a nice pair of moobs in a wifebeater!

LoTekK

Oh god, those shorts are all sorts of win. He needs bigger tits, though.

Sauron

Thanks for comments! still workin'
changed wrincles on that vest and detailed his head a little.
Comments are still welcome

Sauron

forget to say that last shots are without perspective)

Sauron

Zbrush has crush'd and i didn't save anything for all day stupid me!
anybody heard about plugin for Zbrush wich make autosaves every N minutes?

nfrrtycmplx

lol

Sauron

Ok, i think im on the finishline with this highpoly already. going to retop it now.

Wells

The way you've modeled the knees doesn't look quite right to me, I think they should be something more like this:

renderhjs

the model looks like it existed before because all the things you added don't match the style. The idea is nice but style and execution is not consistent.

Sauron

Sectaurs, Wow! thanks, i'll try to make them sharper
Renderhjs, this model is for small avatar, about 115x255, for some kind of MMO game, for my friend, he is very thin and his nickname is angel, tryin' to make a trash picture(he ask'd for), anyway thanks for comments, that realy helps!

Sauron

there goes lowpoly mesh!


any comments?

Pope Adam

I like the character, and he's very well done. I think he could have been caricaturized a bit more with more extreme proportions. Just my 2 cents - LOOKS GREAt


anxious to see the grotesque textures!

Sauron

Pope Adam, thanks a lot! ill try to do my best

normals test

Sauron

Ok, there goes final bake, don't like how do those knees look, but cant do anything with them, everything else looks fine to me also solved problems with fingers a bunny ears. Going to texture it now, realy need your comments, thanks!

System

Awesome, he's got some proper obesity skin folding going on in those arms, nice work

throttlekitty

Fantastic work! The slippers are a nice touch, but something seems off about them.

P442

maybe the ends should curve down a bit on the slippers? gravity taking effect

holygon

Luke_Starkie wrote: »

A vest my friend
My only crit now is on the vest look at the straps and the bit near his boobs, and compare it with this picture.
Still awesome work !

It's actually a singlet, not a vest.

Sauron

Thanks a lot guys! ill bend those bunny ears later, when will pose him
Diffuse map+normal, still need to work on skin. Crits are still wellcome ^____^

his eyes are sain': "OMFG! there's a chocolate cake!"

Wells

we call those 'wife beaters'

they don't normally go between the nipples - this looks more like he stretched the love out of something much too small for him.

bunny ears look a little anemic - they should be fatter and fluffier, i think.

still not the underside of his knees should be more fat-e'-fat, in the picture i posted up top you'll see the thigh and calf are firmly smooshed against each other quite a bit, whereas you've got a bit of space between them, making his thigh lose a lot of fat at the knee and giving him that odd bit of fat roll between.

he needs a package. look how tight those pants are! he should have a disturbingly descriptive bulge.

love the expression on his face

Sauron

Thanks man!

this looks more like he stretched the love out of something much too small for him.

Yes, that is what i tryed to show.
And about those knees, i hate them already ^______^ but too lazy to resculpt and rebake and compose and all that shit again, sorry I think the main problem is with that marked area, i'll just try not to show it on my final shot. Thanks a lot for helping

Sauron

ok, here goes a new creature
Inspired by "flesh" from S.T.A.L.K.E.R.


PS: Yes, those are testicles and dick is up coming soon :poly136:

BradMyers82

Good lord! Those testicles are big and strange looking.
tbh, and straight to the point, it almost looks like a huge vagina atm.
If your gonna add something like that, better get it correct.
Think "coin purse" shape, and have them hang much further away from the anus.
Probably make them smaller too, but since it's a monster that's more personal preference I guess.

Hey, don't get sidetracked though, finish up the fat man. He's dying for a specular map.

Sauron

Thansk Brad i just lost my 3dmax CD, will finish him when find it ^_____^
About "flesh", it's just for fun, a quick concept, sculpt and maybe lowpolish it (if i'll find that stupid CD!)

a little update

butt_sahib

hahaha man that comment by brad made me laugh like a cheap whore

Sauron

looking better now?

whipSwitch

um, well, score for sack sculpting! look at the side shot though, they are hanging out, not down.

Sauron

Thanks, they are hanging like that because his belly prevents to hang down, an I don't want to hang them lower

Orgoth02

and why does he have a big fat hard on again?

Sauron

Orgoth02 wrote: »

and why does he have a big fat hard on again?

Sorry, don't understand that, can you use another words?) Thats my bad english, sorry again

Lord McMutton

He's got an erection cause he's gonna get himself a woman!

Sauron

Ok, here's an update
Still need AO and rig, i'm tired of 'im

aipash

HA! I love the trailer trash theme you have going here. Classic! My only beef is the massive amount of tris I can see in your base mesh. But that is just my nit picking if you will.