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DWIV -3D- Kyler M

Got some quick sketches scribbled out in between class.

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The first sketch caught my interest so I ran with it. He's a claricon with a specialty for banishing and trapping demons. The bird cage is the magic artifact he uses to trap the demon's spirit.

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Birdcage man still needs some work. I think his proportions are still too normal, a pose and expression would probably help sell the character too. The cage design is pretty simple at the moment, I'll try to post so ideas on that tomorrow.

Any thoughts?

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  • Jesse Moody
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    Jesse Moody polycounter lvl 18
    Keep sketching. I would say get away from birdcage man. He seems a bit too plain in my opinion. Do something really off the wall.
  • NuclearWarrior
    What up Kyler!

    I don't know if you were planning on it, but if the birdcage was made out of wood or like bamboo, I think it would give it a more organic/hand made feel and fit his character more.

    Also, it occurred to me that maybe he could have a summon that is a fairly large bird, maybe even bigger than him, that grabs the soul and puts it in the cage once the enemy has been vanquished.
  • Mezz
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    Mezz polycounter lvl 8
    I like this idea and think it could really go somewhere.

    Here's a suggestion for his silhouette:
    He looks like he could do with some really exaggerated proportions, so I think really extending his body so its very thin and long would be cool. Then he'd have the big native headpiece, which would add interest to the silhouette. Also, with the cage in one hand beside him, it would have nice negative space from his thin body to the large cage he's holding.

    Just a thought, still early in the process, anything is worth a go!
    Good luck :)
  • Kyler M
    Mezz- Thanks! those are some good suggestions. I'm still sketching out a new version of this guy, he'll more alien. Hopefully I can get out of the totally human shape. Hoping to post that one later tonight.

    Nuclearwarrior- What's up! Started on your DW stuff yet? I'm looking forward to seeing it. I'm definitely going to put the summon idea into the next sketch. I was thinking maybe like a phantom bird made out of all the souls or something.

    jesse moody- Still sketching stuff out, but doesn't feel like I've gone off the wall yet lol. I came up with this raccoon robot scout, just to try something different. I've never tried to make a robot character before so it was a fun sketch.

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    More coming soon :D
  • coldkodiak
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    This is a better, more interesting direction.

    It would be cool if you integrated some of those native American motifs with this fox/cat/raccoon bot, the way I'm seeing it right now.
  • Kyler M
    -coldkodiak- Hm, I like it! I'll do another pass on that guy.

    In the meantime, here's some new ideas. Top one is a new take on the bird cage guy and the second is a norm assassin who uses little birds to scout for her. The artifact is her giant arced blade.

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  • los
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    hey dude! your on to something with that girl, keep exploring as im sure you are, the blladeis a little lack luster at the moment. give its some bulk, play with shapes thin to thick type of stuff.
    good silhouette though kyler.
  • Kyler M
    New update, this one's a norm stalker. Going with a Shadow of the Colossus vibe. She's got a bunch of climbing gear to be able to take out the big bad guys :D.

    I'm trying to get an interesting silhouette, while keeping her athletic/acrobatic build. I'll also be looking at adding a big weapon. Giant crossbow maybe? Anyway, more updates soon!

    Colors aren't final, just wanted to give it a little life :)

    Crits and comments always welcome!

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  • NuclearWarrior
    Hey Kyler. The shirt looks better now just with those little touches.
    I was wondering what the green blades on her forearm were for. They look cool, but I'm not sure of the purpose.
    It occurred to me another set of "gear" she could have is grenades. Might seem odd, but it might be something she could toss into a demon lord's mouth, or ear, or possibly an important exhaust pipe in a large robot.
    Also, maybe a reason to give her a full body suit would be so she could auto-camouflage. Like, she could turn into the surface she is next to (like Solid Snakes outfit in MG4) so that she could not be detected as easily by the demon lord/monster she is climbing on.

    Just some ideas. Keep it up.
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