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jouste polycounter lvl 14
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:final line roughs:

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:original post:
let's do it! everything's looking great so far, how about we show those other guys what the gray and green is made of!

here's just a real quick draft of some silhouettes . leaning more towards a norm or demon but i'll have to see. thing's will usually start coming together after the first couple of fun sketches. best of luck everyone!
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edit: dammit can an admin change the title to a 2D? sorry about that

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  • AcidLehmann
    1, 3 and 6 .. well i liked them all , lol
  • Saidin311
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    Saidin311 polycounter lvl 11
    YES! Can't wait to see your entry man. Love the thumbs, love 5, 8 and 14!
  • konstruct
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    konstruct polycounter lvl 18
    cool color additions. 5 is awesome
  • killingpeople
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    killingpeople polycounter lvl 18
    You do 3D?!

    edit: Aah, it was a just mistake ;)
    I'd waaant... 15 to be on my kickball team.
  • LoJack
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    LoJack polycounter lvl 12
    3, 8, and 13 :D really looking forward to your entry
  • binopittan
    i loved them all. go for no 6 & 8.
  • Gav
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    Gav quad damage
    You're going to make a lot of boys jealous, you know.

    Really like 5 :)
  • indian_boy
    oh hell yea nice thumbs

    6, 8, and 15 look the neatest to me
  • adam
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    adam polycounter lvl 19
    Woo! 8 is pretty badass in that he has some emotion to him compared to the gangly beasts and warriors going 'raah!'.
  • BoBo_the_seal
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    BoBo_the_seal polycounter lvl 18
  • jouste
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    jouste polycounter lvl 14
    @acidlehmann: thanks for dropping by! and checking out the thumbs!

    @saidin311: i'm pretty stoked on all the people doing this as well. thanks for the feedback!

    @konstruct: i'm a fan of 5 as well, i'm really new to the thumbnail things but i'm sure its good practice.

    @killingpeople: man that would be one mean center on a kickball team. thanks for stopping by dude! looking forward to hearing from you again.

    @lojack: you picked one of the winners of the mini contest i heald in my brain! 8 was chosen! good taste friend. ;D

    @binopittan: thanks for having all that love to show the thumbs! 8 was picked for the next loose sketch!

    @gavimage: haha, thanks for the comments!

    @indianboy: thanks alot for checking out the art up there, i'll be updating quite often.

    @adambrome: pretty good call there brome, thats the one i roughed up for this next update. thanks for fixing my post title as well!

    @DKK: ok so thats another tick for 8. thanks for choosing!

    @bobo: sweet! thanks for checking them out, i'll be doing alot more drawing but here's a quick and dirty #8 just for fun.


    ok so just for fun before i crash i did up a really really rough sketch of tehe most popular thumb. again this is still all up in the air but it was a fun experience anyways and a good excercise to loosen me up for later on.

    thanks to everybody that dropped me a line! there'll be alot more to come.

    go polycount!
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  • frubes
    i love all your thumbs, they have a really dynamic feel to them. For some reason though im drawn to 10. I just want to see what you would do with it. I think Dom War is about producing something original and 10 for me stands out as just that.

    Love your work Jouste, cant wait to see what you do.
  • killingpeople
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    killingpeople polycounter lvl 18
    Personally, I'd demand an explanation for 12 if I knew you better, so I'll just ask politely and stand very expressionless so not to frighten you.
  • Rapante
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    hehe, cool 8 was my fav as well :) deffo watching this thread :)
  • leslievdb
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    leslievdb polycounter lvl 15
    1 and 8 get my vote

    the lines for 8 look pretty good, i think it has a lot of potential
    keep it up
  • AimBiZ
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    AimBiZ polycounter lvl 14
    6 & 8 are my favourites, and I also like the development of 8, not sure about the weapons though.
  • wizo
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    wizo polycounter lvl 17
    Nice Jouste, I was gonna say 3 & 8. That last concept really shows off great features, im liking the direction a lot!

    As a tip, maybe push the cool characteristics of the concept even further like even smaller hips or bigger shoulderpads, assymetry.... ya know?! ..but its already looking great :) !
  • rv_el
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    rv_el polycounter lvl 18
    oh oh! these are cool. no 12 and 13 stick out for me.

    keep it up!
  • machuca
    uuuu ur developing #8. nice.
    even though #9 kicks alls assses
  • r4ptur3
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    r4ptur3 polycounter lvl 10
    love all the little notes on your character development! keep going :)
  • Wicked-J
    I really like #5, 8 and 15
  • Scrumpy
    2,8 and 15 where my favourites, really like this style wish my stuff looked more light hearted like this!
  • kite
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    kite polycounter lvl 17
    those are awesome! I like them all but there's something about number 13 snuffling up enemy combatants like an anteater that would be so cool. just needs dinky little t-rex arms
  • LoJack
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    LoJack polycounter lvl 12
    GO MAN GO!

    my mind, it is prepared to be blown! (away, you sick sick people)
  • jouste
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    @frubes: thanks for the vote of confidence! i do like 10 quite a bit, i'll have to see if he sneaks his tentacles into one of my other roughs!

    @killingpeople: hey man! no prob, next deal i do up will make sense of that drunken scribble. just you wait.

    @rapante: great! good to know the thread will be watched!

    @ravenslayer: 8's on the backburner for now while i loosen up a bit. thanks for dropping by!

    @aimbiz: good eye friend. nothing is more tacked on then that sad excuse for a weapon. i'l get onto fixing it. hopefully the weapon here is waaaay more awesome ;D

    @wizo: yes! wizooooo! thanks for checking it out. and i took your advice and just pushed the bigger silhouette to come up with my next rough.

    @rv_el: nice choices on the thumbs! thanks for checking em out!

    @muchucha: thatta boy! 9 was secretly my favorite thumb!! ding ding ding! 10 points to our friend muchucha! so i played around a bit and came up with grugravugagrub.

    @r4ptur3: those notes are here to stay! thanks!

    @wicked-j: nice gambit of choices, 15 is tickling a small bit of my interest as well, maybe a mount of some sorts?

    @scrumpy: its all about relaxing and having a good time when you do stuff. i'm actually guilty of being a little too stiff on that last rough, i think this one will be better tho.

    @kite: yeah 13 keeps visiting me again and again. i think the proportions and goofy pose will be an influence as well.

    @lojack: thanks for the cheers! here we go!



    so i really felt lousy about that last sketch, it felt really stiff and there was no direction. so here we go again, now with more notes! i really decided to just have fun with this one and it felt really good. thanks for checking it out all!

    its grugravugagrub the demon prince of desecration and doom! fused with the power of death, the knee pads of woe, and the dreaded shovelabra! gruggy patrols the the demonic realm desecrating the millions upon ba-jillions of corpses so they can never truly rest.

    these poor souls wail round until they are ultimately scarfed down by gruggy where they are passed with awful consequences.

    the grugster has a panache for getting lost as well because lets face it, the demonic realm is a big place. to remedy this, he had a quick reference map scarred across his chest by his fearsome ex-wife.

    the shovelabra is a fabled three pronged shovel, forged in the black pits of rogthortho, a bi-product of the cataclysmic concert of the 14 hellions. it digs through anything 3 times faster than anything that... uh... can dig through the said thing...

    it digs through people all the freaking time, it's crazy.

    and the kneepads of woe used to be alright until they saw "the happening" by M.Knight Shyamalan.

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  • jerry
    Sometimes i wonder what drugs you're on. I laughed all the way through the little story. Good stuff.

    GO PC!
  • coldkodiak
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    coldkodiak polycounter lvl 17
    is he stepping on some chick? That'd be so awesome.
  • Zcorpion
    Gotta luv this stuff! keep it up:D
  • jouste
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    jouste polycounter lvl 14
    @jerry: great to hear! and no drugs there, unless you count meth and a PCP enema drugs that is... go PC!

    @coldkodiak: for sure! that would be awesome if he was broad stomping. it seems my rough rocks don't really look like rocks, or you have a few issues with women. not sure about the right answer to this one :P. thanks for checking out the post! go PC!

    @zcorpion: will keep it up! thanks for the encouragment. go PC!


    so here's some thumbs for fun and warm up. still got so many ideas kicking around this noggin o' mine.
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    and now onto another rough idea! took this in another direction. wanted a human dude who has bound a bunch of djinnis to himself and uses them to zap the crap outta his enemies! i picked clericon cause he binds stuff.

    meet erol the lampster! erol was a brilliant guy who was super good at treasure hunting and anagrams and stuff, the wars were totally happening and he knew that there were ancient relics that held great power and would totally help fight the human fight.

    he discovered a lamp through a series of several cryptic divinci code type things and rubbed it up to release the djinn. wish one he wished for the power to enslave djinni's. the second wish was for every magic lamp in the universe. he has never made another wish.

    erol blasts his way through combat on great ancient beings of power with a brace of magic lamps and an unlimited supply of wishes. being the super genius he is the wishes he has memorized have been rehearsed and studied thousands of times to prevent any brutal error the resentful djinni's may twist into happening. like those jerk dungeon masters do whenever you get a chance to cast wish.

    erol is no slouch in the martial department and also wields a sweet scimitar. in this image he's riding mhalzamhutazar, the djinn's contempt for erol has twisted him into a noxious cloud of hateful agony. this works out well for erol who channels mhalzamhutazar's tormented well of power right up the rectums of all who challenge the norm race!


    had a fun time on this guy, so many ideas, gonna think about focusing on them way later. till then let the idea maelstrom commence!


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  • Scrumpy
    Really like the new sketch! ( well i liked the last 1 but this is better!), very very cool dude !
  • pestibug
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    pestibug polycounter lvl 18
    Very nice thumbs and sketches. The backstories rock! i shall donate my 2 cents now.

    8, 10, 13, 15. These all have very interesting shapes to me. :)
  • MoP
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    MoP polycounter lvl 18
    jouste! you da man.
    the lampster is very cool... i am also liking #2 and #5 from the latest batch of thumbs.
  • AimBiZ
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    AimBiZ polycounter lvl 14
    You have a very nice style going on here! And I love the storytelling!

    Must say I'm more interested in the latest thumbs than the latest sketch. The Lampster guy is cool but his mount would need a bit more interesting shliouete. Right now he's just a pile of muscle, which doesn't have to be a bad thing but making them a bit smaller and with a more exagurated sihlouette would make it look more tense I think, and frightening.

    Keep it up! Whatever you choose for final concept I have a feeling it will be awesome. :D
  • adam
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    adam polycounter lvl 19
    <3 'demonic dirt' is just fucking cool.
  • Diwan
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    Diwan polycounter lvl 13
    lol thats soooo coool! Evil Alladin on a nasty ass demon!
  • Knucklebear
    Joust, you made my day, grugravugagrub is so full of win.
  • r4ptur3
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    r4ptur3 polycounter lvl 10
    your concepts made me laugh so hard dude. awesome stuff -- keep it up! comical monsters of killing for the win!!!
  • rats78
    best thumnails i've seen yet. Nice 'n varied...lots of funky proportions. I love the top heavy dudes with the little legs. This is defo one of my 'one to watch' threads. Nice one!
  • jouste
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    @Scrumpy: thanks! i enjoyed drawing him.

    @pestibug: great choices! noted and taken into consideration.

    @mop: really glad your getting in on this dom-war dude. thanks for checking the stuff out! i think thumb 5 has got some neat ideas going on as well.

    @aimbiz: yeah that's a viable point, these are meant to be quicker sketches just to hopefully open up myself to new ideas. good eye though. i wasn't too happy with the djinn's head so that would change for sure if i did up this guy.

    @adambrome: thanks! it will be going in regardless of what my final piece is.

    @diwan: you got it man! he's kinda like a demonologist of sorts as well.

    @knucklebear: glad i could help make your day, he's definitely one of my faves as well.

    @r4ptur3: thanks for the vote of confidence man! i shall keep them up.

    @rats78: glad you dig em! just for the sake of doing thumbs i'll be doing a set per post for practice and more ideas.


    mandatory thumbs post!!!
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    so i didn't have alot of time but i did up a demon lord named crackles! he is constantly exploding and wields the super awesome PITCH-FORK CHUCKS!!!

    he is wearing some demonic sporting equipment and a really scary mask. like i said, really quick drawing and really just there to get down some more ideas, oh, and draw some pitchfork chucks...

    go PC!
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  • gavinneil
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    gavinneil polycounter lvl 12
    Great sketches mate! Have you decided on one yet?
  • Kamui
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    Kamui polycounter lvl 10
    Hah! these are sweet man! I hadn't visited your thread since the first batch but i'm lovin these characters and stories. Did you just blast out that last one in about half an hour? great!

    I hope you maintain this style in your final submission. Stylized with humor but rendered to the teeth!

    3 pronged shovel! i love it!
  • LoJack
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    LoJack polycounter lvl 12
    man, I think I could be completely happy just watching all these badass ideas rupture from your mind :D

    I love all of these, cant wait for more and what lies in wait for the final, never stop rollin!!
  • lorddon
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    lorddon polycounter lvl 18
    Good lord you're an inspiration, Jouste.
  • Tumerboy
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    Tumerboy polycounter lvl 17
    jouste, I love you.
  • Bryan Cavett
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    Bryan Cavett polycounter lvl 19
    This stuff is awesome... so original!
  • machuca
    really liked the explosive wounds dude. also thumb #5 on your post #31.
    and the "watch that reads time to die!!" is full of win!
  • Wicked-J
    I'm digging your process, it's motivating
  • r4ptur3
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    r4ptur3 polycounter lvl 10
    awesome, as usual! whats worse than taking a numchuck to the dome? taking a pitchforchuck to the dome....and then getting blown to shreds.
  • jouste
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    @gavinneil: hey dude thanks! and no i haven't i've kinda just been having a great time coming up with stuff. hopefully anyone having trouble with some ideas can snag some off here.

    @kamui: wicked! glad you dig it. and i'm pretty much gonna stick with this style. there are all stars that can blow my stuff out of the water so i gotta at least have some fun with it.

    @lojack: i shall keep on rolling friend! go PC!

    @lorddon: quite the compliment there pal! thanks a lot!

    @tumerboy: i love you too nick. thanks for being the first to say that, the silence was getting really akward.

    @bryan cavett: wow thanks a lot bryan! super stoked for your piece as its looking amazing. always liked your work. and i'll try and keep em' original, i gotta have something going for me! ;D

    @machuca: yes! thanks for noticing the watch! thanks for the comments.

    @wicked-j: that's the best thing i can hear! glad to help the motivation!

    @r4ptur3: spoken as a true warrior, you know what it means to deal with the pitchforchuck (thanks for naming it clearer btw).


    must... appease... the thumb gods!!!
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    ok so just a few more to get this outta my system and then some focus. so here's the cluster fiend! he is a horrible demon lord who continously festers and spawns new heads that fall to the ground and splatter disgustingly all over the place.

    he's infused with darkness and those sweet looking blades on his gauntlets are so sharp they can cut through light creating more darkness!

    he's built like a gorrila cause a gorrila with a dozen heads coming at you would totally ruin your evening out with the folks. he lumbers around spawning his chompy head minions, and he's linked to all of them telepathically and can move them around all creepy like.

    another quick picture anyways. i'm thinking that i'm getting closer to something to choose.

    wow, getting tired. thanks for following dudes! go PC!


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  • fightpunch
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    That last one is awesome :)
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