I like this! The texturing is lovely, great poly distribution.
So, the crits!
The forelegs seem a little stiff, and I wonder if you could pushed a few of the shapes a little more: deeper ribcage, narrower abdomen.
The UVs could be improved a little too - some of that alpha could be shared giving you more room for the body. If the mane is always there then you could split off the head and not worry about seams since the alphas would cover it.
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So, the crits!
The forelegs seem a little stiff, and I wonder if you could pushed a few of the shapes a little more: deeper ribcage, narrower abdomen.
The UVs could be improved a little too - some of that alpha could be shared giving you more room for the body. If the mane is always there then you could split off the head and not worry about seams since the alphas would cover it.