female marine(from ns2 concept)

Unleashed

Hi guys, need some crits for this model im working on. Its based off the female marine concept for Natural Selection 2 ( http://www.unknownworlds.com/ns2/gallery/ bottom right corner)



I know the hands and feet of the female are a little wonky, but the rest I could use advice on. its also wip, havent paid any attention to the back and still alot of work to go

konstruct

The bolts along the edges give it a medieval feel. also your head is crazy huge.

Unleashed

update:

Made the head smaller, toned down the number of bolts

ElysiumGX

Something...or, everything is very wrong with her base mesh. The armor covers it, but the face needs more feminiminizing. Make it woman, not ape. The armor fits the concept, but the body doesn't.

A little advice on anatomy. Study the actual shape of a ribcage for a more believable torso.

Unleashed

Ill definitely look into the anatomy for the base mesh, but for now my focus is on the armour.
I would have liked to have spent more time on this model, but I feel I need to start the low poly & textured version now.

another update

JohnnyRaptor

the wrinkles on the leg are extremely thin giving the impression the material of her trousers are plasticbag thin, do some search on google for combat trousers or such and study the way the wrinkles and folds behave depending on fabric and thickness.
lookin good tho, hope u plan on texturing it too. lowpoly aswell?

John Warner

nice work man!

SuPa-

Looking good! I especially like the armor
Only issue I have is that the face is slightly masculine... but I guess all females in video games can't be super hot

DeathKitten

Beautiful work! I especially like that she is slightly masculine, it's more realistic than having Barbie dressed in fatigues


My only crit would be the lack of muscle tone... she's a Female Marine for Gods sake, give the girl some definition and curvature!

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