male WiP

emerge

helo, i'm working on a male average joe model
here's my WiP, low poly is 2358 tris atm, currently working on high poly, my mate tells my the cloth folds look unnatural, want some advice

photoshop mockup:


high poly:



low poly:

rooster

i like what you're going for, I think your mate is right though the way the folds kind of corkscrew diagonally from one side to the other make the bottom of the jumper look twisted round his body. The face looks a little clay like to me.

With your light setup, i'd turn shadows on for the backlight- light catching the edge of the nose and lower eye looks kinda odd