"known to cut through super heroes". I LOVE IT! Watch for typos, i see a few in there. My only crit is the (unfinished?) mohawk and then the transition between the crotch and the cock cannon. Its just kindof a line where metal meets flesh. Maybe try to have the flesh fold over the cannon or add some wrinkles around there or bloody tissue. I dunno something to make the transition smoother. Other than that, looks great. Easily one of my favorites
I would really hate to see you stop at just this with the texture, everything has been so awsome so far. the texture is nice, but it definatly can be painted in to alot more. like the others said, the transition between the cock gun and body is to abrubt.
also just in general the skin could use alot more love, blemishes, spots? different hue changes in the skin color bases, etc.
also the engine needs alot mroe love. it almost all one color, one tone. you should go in and really texture the shit out of it. some wear, some burned in exhaust marks, etc.
and well the mohawk...just pretty boring honestly, it blends in to much imo, and just doesnt compare to everything else...would work that out more.
anyways, I hope you do some more to it, cause this has been my favorite throughout the challenge and I hope you win it.
thanks everyone espesh dkrock johny and Clin+, your all SO right, I greatly appreciate the comments and def gonna attend to my textures today. do what I can and turn this sucka in.
With all the comics, this thing is almost like a movie waiting to happen- I laughed so hard. If this were about marketing, not just the final product, this thing would win. It could still be up there, but like others have said it really needs a bit of oomph in the diffuse or it wont stand out. And that would be a shame as grubb scout deserves a place after all this. Good luck man.
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also just in general the skin could use alot more love, blemishes, spots? different hue changes in the skin color bases, etc.
also the engine needs alot mroe love. it almost all one color, one tone. you should go in and really texture the shit out of it. some wear, some burned in exhaust marks, etc.
and well the mohawk...just pretty boring honestly, it blends in to much imo, and just doesnt compare to everything else...would work that out more.
anyways, I hope you do some more to it, cause this has been my favorite throughout the challenge and I hope you win it.