Love the design but Fred mentioned:
From brief:
- Keep excessive gore and nudity to a decent level please! This contest is not pg13, but you should be able to show your mother should she ask to see it.
IDK, bout Ur momma but mine wouldn't wanna see humongore jewels hanging in mid-air
On that area maybe make a weapon there's room for improvment.
i think the choadness needs to return. I'm guessing nudity is looked at differently across the world, so i wont speak for everyone, but come on, theres nothing wrong with that lovely pair of blue balls! How uptigth do you have to be not to enjoy that?
the balls were enjoyable... but if he took a wrong term and slammed into a tree.... well... u can call it birth-control if u want... but i call it pain...
keep his balls behind some safety glass and it's fine by me!
If he takes a wrong turn and hits a wall, he's still going to be hurting. I think having it hang out goes a way to explain his state of mind. I mean, he's strapped a giant pair of rockets to his back, and thats about it. He's obviously out for blood with no thought to his own safety.
If he is to be wang-less I suggest bringing his belly button back, he need something down there to help balance things out. I really, really REALLY like this one.
ahhh give him his junk back, he looks all sad with out them. They just need some protection, nothing wrong with cock armor. You could even make holes for his balls to show to his enemy to show how big his balls are.
Also he needs some weapons so why not put it on his cock? Nothing would lower moral more than being hit from a shot for the enemy's cock gun.
Your concepts and designs for this character flow really well. I could be wrong but maybe adding a weapon would fit better into the Dominance War competition. I know you were thinking about making it a "scout" but even scouts carry weapons or have some sort of cloaking device. I could only think of this character flying around at high speeds and ramming itself into it's enemy as a last resort if it wasn't equipped with a weapon. You should place a fishbowl with air falves over the weiner so it can breath...LoL! I agree with Vig, the belly area needs a belly button (unless it grew up in a test tube of course).
Cock-Cannon for the laugh and WIN! I love the little cartoon you did thats inspiring stuff
The only thing that the concept might get knocked for is being a touch over the inorganic line, and more than 20% cyborg if the back pack is cyborg'ed into the character. You might need to consider separating the back pack so it comes out of the weapon budget? But really the coolness factor will more than likely overide any hick-ups with the brief -)
brilliant.
that poor 3d total man! LOL
I think you're on the right track with 3, it seems to fit his character the most. I'm trying to imagine how this guy would land, probably not so gracefully, his jetpack looks so darn heavy.
I disagree with the whole "too mechanical" comments. The character is pretty much entirely organic (minus the cock cannon). He just happens to have a jetpack.
Great concept dude and the quick sketch gave me a laugh.
I think itd look good without the facemask, and it would take away the cyborg feeling.. awesome idea! also you could change the robo harness to straps etc to make the jetpack obviously seperate
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From brief:
- Keep excessive gore and nudity to a decent level please! This contest is not pg13, but you should be able to show your mother should she ask to see it.
IDK, bout Ur momma but mine wouldn't wanna see humongore jewels hanging in mid-air
On that area maybe make a weapon there's room for improvment.
said he needs a bigger weapon
I gotta admit though, them balls danglin like they are seems like a major weak spot for the enemy to take advantage of...
(ps - this is Dan, Artem's friend from the Workshop)
keep his balls behind some safety glass and it's fine by me!
If he takes a wrong turn and hits a wall, he's still going to be hurting. I think having it hang out goes a way to explain his state of mind. I mean, he's strapped a giant pair of rockets to his back, and thats about it. He's obviously out for blood with no thought to his own safety.
Let his jimmies fly free!
Also he needs some weapons so why not put it on his cock? Nothing would lower moral more than being hit from a shot for the enemy's cock gun.
Very interested to see what you progress towards.
other ideas
and just for fun
i love it, but it may be against the brief
I love this funny creature!
The only thing that the concept might get knocked for is being a touch over the inorganic line, and more than 20% cyborg if the back pack is cyborg'ed into the character. You might need to consider separating the back pack so it comes out of the weapon budget? But really the coolness factor will more than likely overide any hick-ups with the brief -)
GRUBB THING FTW!!!!
that poor 3d total man! LOL
I think you're on the right track with 3, it seems to fit his character the most. I'm trying to imagine how this guy would land, probably not so gracefully, his jetpack looks so darn heavy.
haha so awesome!
Great concept dude and the quick sketch gave me a laugh.
-caseyjones
also - I always read your name as Giraffe Pirate, which is awesome.
That gun sure is frightening.
The other uses of Grubb Scout.