Pfft, Rockstar hasn't finished a model here on PC since dominance war last year.
(Really looking forward to see what you post, anyway. Your entry last year is one of the main works that inspired me to get serious about art last year.)
oooooh boy... ur the one who i was waiting for... but wait... where's the art?! get to it... i need something to drool over! (not that there isn't enough already...)
good luck! not that you'll be needing it... can't wait to see what u come up with!
Loving it man. Can't wait to see how she comes out.
So far the only thing that bugs me are the boobs. Seem like they are too smooth or like they aren't busy enough to fit or something. Not sure exactly, but they stick out from the rest thing. (not that I have a problem wtih boobs sticking out of course.)
Bewbs don't look odd now. Did you show it to me before or after you added a neck? That might've been it. I don't know, though, I'm hideously tired right now. In any case, no complaints from me anymore. gauss was right to be toting you around as an example of how to merge tech and fantasy properly. Now watch as everyone else does a chick like this. xD
the concept is nice, I did expect a little more asymmetry though Theres lots of great elements but the chest/jacket is a little weak compared to the rest. I think you could have something much more elaborate and interesting going on there!
This might help explain that, spacemonkey:
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<Noel> No, not that
<Noel> I think it's just that there's all this more detailed stuff around'em and then wham, pretty much bare tits
<Noel> Maybe I just have a boob fixation right now
<rawkstar> well... gotta have some plain areas or peoples eyes will explode hehe
<Noel> Well, that's good for the competition
<Noel> Kills off the enemiez
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Maybe. Just maybe. (Also: turns out it was the neck -- not the contrast in detail.)
I like the face and head piece a lot, the rest has a flow to it but seems a bit arbitrary. (though that's the case with any female body armor in games.)
liking the design , just curious thought as a play on this knife design, ever thought of incorporating a switch blade system inside this character?
Like I mean have it that this character has inside her arms long spikes/ knives and can stab people with them kinda like a switch blade when people got to close
I think it would add to the detail of the character if you could incorporate something like that.
Well either way good luck
oh yea, I told you I would see you at the next dominance war
I mean this in the nicest of ways but something about her mid section looks off in the concept...like she's about 3-4 months in. I think it's just the way the bottom of the jacket is flowing outward to the front and there isn't much going on for shape of that area of flesh other than the navel. It just seems to be pushing out and in an odd way. maybe if the jacket's bottom where to push back at the bottom over the hips or come up a lil bit to shorten the length instead so you can see the defining crest of her hips. Maybe the second set of antlers/horns? being pushed backwards a bit rather than out to the side like the first pair would give her head shape a bit more sleek / graceful shape. Just some thoughts. Otherwise it looks great and good luck with it. Can't wait to see the finished piece.
I don't see it like that at all.
The character doesn't have to be super-model thin and anorexic to look sleek or graceful. She's a warrior, afterall :P
I don't see it like that at all.
The character doesn't have to be super-model thin and anorexic to look sleek or graceful. She's a warrior, afterall :P
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I didn't say she was fat or that she had to be thinner. She has no definition of a shape in the midsection of the torso...just outward shapes...it doesn't look like it fits the rest of the concept as a whole.
Holy crap, it's the other guy's hot little sister!
I dig it man! I think you should mess with her vest around the stomach area to make her form clearer, but otherwise this will make a great model with your skills. More more more!
It's likely the jacket is coming down lower than you would like for a "chix" character... I think it's fine... the jacket obscures the curves kind of like a gaisha .. i can't spell so whatever... but you know what i mean...
The only comment i have is that the "cod piece" makes her look like she's wearing a strap-on... cause the thing that comes up at the top ... but other than that... good job so far!
hey man...
one of my friends just came over, and i showed him ur sketch. he liked it overall, but felt that the mid-section needed some detailing and activity, and he also felt that the "bosom" region (ie. boobies, breasts, titties... watever) need some detail on them...
he suggested something like the costume on Battle Angel Alita... but after googling it, we didn't find what we wanted. So, we found this instead:
he feels that u should incorporate a vent-type design on the... ummm bosom...
i felt that it needs at least some form of activity or design on it... he was just more specific!
cheers!
i dont really think you need to do anything.. just start modeling this junk.. you can do so much with textures and material types that a colorless line concept can not show. visually its balanced.. i do vote for some Masamune Shirow nipples, not little hard tips but puffy cups of pleasure. you kind of already have it in the concept but i think you can push it just a tiny bit.
you know, begrudgingly i think i have to agree with arshlevon's call about fluffly-snuggly soft lovepillows like shirow-san would draw. in any case, she will still look pretty 'banging' in every which way.
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Now all my plans are ruined
Can't wait to see what madness you bring forth...
(Really looking forward to see what you post, anyway. Your entry last year is one of the main works that inspired me to get serious about art last year.)
Good luck dude, I'm interested to see what you come up with this year.
-caseyjones
All I know is that your submission thumbnail has boobies in it.
boobies = level up!
good luck! not that you'll be needing it... can't wait to see what u come up with!
well here comes the concept.
(update on top)
Looks pretty sweet.
So far the only thing that bugs me are the boobs. Seem like they are too smooth or like they aren't busy enough to fit or something. Not sure exactly, but they stick out from the rest thing. (not that I have a problem wtih boobs sticking out of course.)
awesome art... the only thing i could say is make the blue green... and that means absolutely nothing... lol!
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<Noel> No, not that
<Noel> I think it's just that there's all this more detailed stuff around'em and then wham, pretty much bare tits
<Noel> Maybe I just have a boob fixation right now
<rawkstar> well... gotta have some plain areas or peoples eyes will explode hehe
<Noel> Well, that's good for the competition
<Noel> Kills off the enemiez
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Maybe. Just maybe. (Also: turns out it was the neck -- not the contrast in detail.)
look forward to seeing you on the field.
she has a lot of knives.
Like I mean have it that this character has inside her arms long spikes/ knives and can stab people with them kinda like a switch blade when people got to close
I think it would add to the detail of the character if you could incorporate something like that.
Well either way good luck
oh yea, I told you I would see you at the next dominance war
(met you at your seminar back in florida)
like she's about 3-4 months in
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I don't see it like that at all.
The character doesn't have to be super-model thin and anorexic to look sleek or graceful. She's a warrior, afterall :P
I think it looks amazing, rawkstar.
I don't see it like that at all.
The character doesn't have to be super-model thin and anorexic to look sleek or graceful. She's a warrior, afterall :P
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I didn't say she was fat or that she had to be thinner. She has no definition of a shape in the midsection of the torso...just outward shapes...it doesn't look like it fits the rest of the concept as a whole.
not that she looks pregnant...
and "Rawkstar looks to deliver"?
no no no... Rawkstar is gonna be so good, he'll create little 3d minions to deliver the thing for him...
Fear the glowing Eyeball
V, srsly. Khadomas, FTW. lol.
Looking hawt, V. Looking hawwwwwwt. damn russkies.
I dig it man! I think you should mess with her vest around the stomach area to make her form clearer, but otherwise this will make a great model with your skills. More more more!
But seriously, not to hijack your thread. The concept is looking nice dude. Hanging to see this in 3D.
-caseyjones
Ya man Super sweet!!!
The only comment i have is that the "cod piece" makes her look like she's wearing a strap-on... cause the thing that comes up at the top ... but other than that... good job so far!
Cheers
edit: hah, it must be..
one of my friends just came over, and i showed him ur sketch. he liked it overall, but felt that the mid-section needed some detailing and activity, and he also felt that the "bosom" region (ie. boobies, breasts, titties... watever) need some detail on them...
he suggested something like the costume on Battle Angel Alita... but after googling it, we didn't find what we wanted. So, we found this instead:
he feels that u should incorporate a vent-type design on the... ummm bosom...
i felt that it needs at least some form of activity or design on it... he was just more specific!
cheers!