i'd say the first idea is seldom the best, just unfortunately not anywhere near often enough to depend on it
this has got a lot of interesting forms going on and has a pretty good overall impression, but i do think it could use a lot of massaging. you could do some thumbnailing in order to refine and nail down those proportions into something more compelling. figure out a theme and really nail it; right now there are a few different things going on and i think it'd do better to have a more concerted appearance. glad that you're in compo neal
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I'm really just keen on getting some ideas out. As they say, the first idea is never the best
this has got a lot of interesting forms going on and has a pretty good overall impression, but i do think it could use a lot of massaging. you could do some thumbnailing in order to refine and nail down those proportions into something more compelling. figure out a theme and really nail it; right now there are a few different things going on and i think it'd do better to have a more concerted appearance. glad that you're in compo neal