Lazy Samuraiii & chick har har
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Daaaang, So lazy.
ahah Nah, I have a lot of crap started,
But Im interested in finishing this one!
Samurai slash Robot slash mech
and the chick that goes inside and control it.
Inside still not done, but Bah! tommorow! ill finish that Heeeyaaa!
yeah, so Ill finish the mesh tommorow, and Start the Texture later. Im moving outside the city soon, soo Ill move my arse.;
Oh and HARRY IS STILL ALIVE!, with long hair, YAYAYY!
b1ll
ahah Nah, I have a lot of crap started,
But Im interested in finishing this one!
Samurai slash Robot slash mech
and the chick that goes inside and control it.
Inside still not done, but Bah! tommorow! ill finish that Heeeyaaa!
yeah, so Ill finish the mesh tommorow, and Start the Texture later. Im moving outside the city soon, soo Ill move my arse.;
Oh and HARRY IS STILL ALIVE!, with long hair, YAYAYY!
b1ll
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the robot is simply great.I'm not sure about the jacket's shoulder, they look strange.The girl's anatomy is strange too, but maybe is a choise.
Can't wait to see this one textured.
The robot is amazing, I'd love to see that textured and moving around.
The 'chick' however, I'm gonna have to decline
Love all the faces.
The robot body looks awesome, but the head looks pretty out-of-place on top of it... and I don't like the robes... they're pretty boring, and they're hiding the cool body.
The woman is pretty cool, I like her face and hair, but the body looks like it's from two different people, like the upper half above the waist is from an athletic young woman, then below the waist from a fat old lady... the anatomy is pretty weird, and the proportions don't seem to work here.
I like them, but I've seen you do better!
the samurai girls' navel is about 4 or 5 inches too low though. should be aligned with the top of the hips
Bah, Im pretty Happy, I dont intend to change Much, The clothes were ment to hide the robot part. I know You guys dont like the proportions much, But Its what I wanted, Trying some new different stuffs.
I've done more on harry since that post, Im thiking Quidding clothing m Yayaya!
b1ll
Looking good, though that chicky is ugly as hell. Giver her a swimsuit model body! and NIPPLES.
/Palm
The girl looks good with her clothes on... or lack there of... nice touch with the g-string. haha... and I LOVE the Harry Potter face. I honestly thought that was just one of your side projects you were gonna forget about. I like how you updated him with longer hair for the movie coming out in November... I can't wait for the next book that comes out next month (I'm a dork).
and i mean, your actual head. LOOSE!
i totally think these are all rad. texture!
These are hot dude. Mech is totaly sweet :O
you know how i always love your stuff.. a lot of potential, obviously
pimping out the naked renders was a good choice if you're looking for crits. whats keeping your models a notch lower than where they should be is the anatomy. i dont recall seeing a lot of full body models from you, but also the ones in your webby share common mistakes, all revolving around anatomy. here too (http://www.planetquake.com/polycount/cottages/b1ll/vol_pop.jpg) the torso is too wide. the muscles of the samurai chick's arms dont support the pose of the bones, which is consequencially making the hand/wrist pose being off. one leads to another..
theres other stuff too which is keeping your wonderful characters from looking even more badass. the key in overcoming repeated mistakes in how one (falsely) perceives anatomy is to be honest enough to admit something doesnt make sense.. pay attention, dont be lazy (ye right) and fix it.
Yeah skrubbles , I made the hair longer because of the movie comming out ahah!! Im planning on finishing him before the Mech samurai!!! Im soo glad that u got why I covered the mech with clothing ah!!!
YO Shotgun, I dunno Man, Im pretter happy how the female turn out, I reckon one thing I will do is Push the rib cage higher and scale it in a bit on the side, But As far as anything else goes on, Its where I want it to be.
$$$$$KP$$$ OMG' UR HEAD IS FAR BIGGER FOO!
Har har, there is no way Im going back in the industry ahahHAHAHAHAH
Oh Mop, I dont see how ur qualified to judge if I've done better or not ? As far as Im concerned ( i believe I am a bit heeey) Lately I've been in a circle doing nothing I like much, and this one is totaly out of that, New proportions, different style of faces, new subject, clothing ,feeling and shit.
So ya, I dont see how u can be qualified to judege if its up to my standards or not heeeyyy
And, ya, THANKS ladies, Ill update today
I'm planning on finishing the lower clothing part for the mech, the robe thingy, its the second test I do with it, and Im still not sure, I have other test started, Ill SEEEEE
and Ill work on harry today, I want to finish this suckaa first.
C Y A
Im just sharing what I have been doing, that is all, I didnt ask anything.
oh and even though i really dont care for mr. harry potter all that much, he's looking cool too. perhaps too cool for the character
I'll update once Im done on that.
Im working on fucking harry right now, YAYAY!
Yo, Im soo happy theres a few more people that are getting the style of thoses 2 thingy, Saweet,
cochtl : You got it, That is a style, and subject Im aiming for. Thanks man!
Gauss, Thanks, I realy needed to try some different stuff
Cool.!
Lol Soul, ya I should go for a massive camel toe feeling hey? har har
Ill update later.
b1ll
Damn cochtl that Mech knight concept art is some of the best ive ever seen im gonna have to hunt that stuff down...wow !
the samurai is nice too
1) Belly Button is too low needs to be moved up.
2) Weird fatty buldge in the inner leg #1.
3) The lower skirt doesn't connect to the upper corset piece? This is an example of the crazy mesh I see.
4) An outline of the way I WOULD do the torso/hip transition. But as you said its your model do what makes you happy.
5) Tri-strips that end in wierd places or for what seems like no reason? I think this goes back to the construction method but I guess if it renders well in the end who cares... There are more all over the mesh if you look for them.
6) that wierd muscle/fatty buldge I talked about, I can't find a reason why it would be there...
It looks good I just think you need to spend some time cleaning it up. Of course because I didn't say I was a "long time fan, big time drooler" of your work I bet I get flamed for this...
Flame away...
I like them.
thats the new name for your style b1ll.
Oh and btw its fun work , Not for clients, Fun For me.
So no thanks Vig, and ROFL!
QUIDDITCH clothing BABEY, WIP of coursee, but Anyway, Im further since that screeny tho
I plan to do 2 others characters that will team up with the Samurai mech and the Chick, ayayay, Ill update with them laterz
CYA
b1ll
Nice work Bill.
The owl is neat but the wings are a bit wrong anatomically ... and I think the "wings" on the Snitch should be longer, but hey, that's just my opinion so you can ignore it LOL
good lookin', b1lly b0y
do you have any plans for doing any more characters?
havent done much lately, I did some work on harry, but fucking got bored of it, so i trash it ahah..
Working on some new stuff, Been concepting and sculpting it while I was net free, Ill post the model once I start tommorow..
Have to get my clients back too, Oups no werk ahah
YAY!
WIp crap I trash
Cya
b1ll
very nice job so far though.
but anyway, Im not fixing this, I trash it a while ago
yay!
b1ll