Cartoon Head modeling
polycounter lvl 18
I'm not really trying for an anime look so I'm still working on this, but C&C are welcome. Please tell me if there are any problems with the topography, or any other suggestions (to get it less anime looking or what ever)
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Just fixed the nose abit and started on the hair. I thinks it's coming along nicely. Though the cheaks and forehead still need more work to get rid of artifacts.
(Green or Blue whaja think?)
(this one and others mainly)
My Sketch (very rough):
I'm not too keen on the face cause it looks too doll-like, but if that's what you were going for, ok. But, it makes the model look awkward with that giant melon on that long neck and thin body. The knees are too low, also.
Last thing, it looks like to me that you're too wide in the shoulders. If you look at this:
http://pinuptoons.com/Galleries/Digital/46.htm
You'll see that the torso doesn't taper out as much as yours does as it goes up. The shoulders also look to be a little less wide than the hips.
Good luck with this.
and i liked the model above .. it's the style which i'm looking for .
Regards
She's coming alone very well.
I can't wait to see her all dressed.
Where are her eye-brows?
Etienne
She's just under 5000 tri right now, I still need to optimize those so I should be able to drop a few hundred polies no problems. I'm still playing with the feet.
Next is the cape, axes, peace maker, and then on to modeling Big Bad.
oh and eyebrows will come with more textureing work. =D
This is great stuff.
Though you seem to have wasted alot of polygons,for example the belt buckle,serveral of those don't do much by being there,also my other issue is that it looks like the legs are now thinner than the arms,for soem reason it didn't look so ovious when she was nakey but now i feel she needs some slightly bulkier legs.
overall though good stuff!!
john