Critiques my Blender 3D Environment please

Araka

Hello

A while back, I created this Encanto fan art—Mirabel’s room in Blender—and I was really proud of it at the time. But after revisiting it a few months later, I’m not as satisfied with it anymore. I’d love some fresh eyes and constructive feedback to understand what I could improve. Could you share your thoughts and advice? Thank you so much in advance : )

Fabi_G

Hi! Looking good already.

Perhaps some straight lines could be broken up and sharp edges beveled. Then possibly some break up and variance on large, unform areas, here cabinet and beams.

If would like to push it further, I think another 'personality pass' would be good. For example: the favorite pillow is patched. Something motivational is written on that blackboard on the wall. There's a candle-holder and notebook on that cupboard in the left of the frame. There's some blankets on the other bed and an open book, back up, on the ground below it.

You cold explore this in 2d first, do some paintovers. Then apply the ideas you like in 3d.

Keep it up

Araka

Fabi_G said:

Hi! Looking good already.

Perhaps some straight lines could be broken up and sharp edges beveled. Then possibly some break up and variance on large, unform areas, here cabinet and beams.

If would like to push it further, I think another 'personality pass' would be good. For example: the favorite pillow is patched. Something motivational is written on that blackboard on the wall. There's a candle-holder and notebook on that cupboard in the left of the frame. There's some blankets on the other bed and an open book, back up, on the ground below it.

You cold explore this in 2d first, do some paintovers. Then apply the ideas you like in 3d.

Keep it up

Thank you ! Those are neat idea : )

iam717

aye,

neat just sharing a link to some lighting that i feel could be added here, it seems you might be going in this direction so anything that softens all of this "rendering scene", would probably go along way.

https://www.artstation.com/artwork/xlY6m

hope it helps that is it for my input.

AlexandrDm

I think your environment looks really good and it needs just a little more work. Totally agree with Araka about 'personality pass'. I would also consider changing the colors of the wardrobe and cabinet. Maybe a more subtle color for the wardrobe and less dark for the cabinet. 

Araka

Thanks you iam717 and  AlexandrDm .
I'll look into it, I like all your recomendation, I'll surely repost a new image when it is done.