Desert environment - would like some critiques

Niddd

Hello everyone I'm trying to finish this scene now, hope I could get some feedback for lighting and set dressing here, thanks in advance

shabba

- lighting is too bright, over exposed
- replace the 3 rocks on the right with some other kind of focal point, those dont look realistic enough and just take away from the scene as a whole
- you lack background elements to provide parallaxing for depth
- your main rock structures have very strong normals
- shadows in spots are going to pure black - too much contrast
- overall composition isnt super interesting imo

Niddd

shabba said:

- lighting is too bright, over exposed
- replace the 3 rocks on the right with some other kind of focal point, those dont look realistic enough and just take away from the scene as a whole
- you lack background elements to provide parallaxing for depth
- your main rock structures have very strong normals
- shadows in spots are going to pure black - too much contrast
- overall composition isnt super interesting imo

Thanks for replying me. The three assets on the right side are actually three parts of a broken obelisk，I was intentionally to make this part a little less logical and weird. I am currently doing another project and I may come back to this if I had enough time later.