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Mech - WIP - Critique please
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JSAN_LEAVES
May 2023
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Wing_Tham_3D
May 2023
Good job on the overall forms.
Some areas to improve would be to adjust the lighting to reduce the harsh reflections on the mech and add some surface variation through roughness to break up the blocks of colour a bit more.
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MayaPour
May 2023
I really like how robust and rigid it looks, yet I would suggest you add more detail on the front- the hands/gun area.
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greentooth
May 2023
Are you trying to recreate the Atlas mech from Mass Effect 3?
We'll need a render with better lighting to really give better critique. But as it stands, just look at your original reference for areas to improve.
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Some areas to improve would be to adjust the lighting to reduce the harsh reflections on the mech and add some surface variation through roughness to break up the blocks of colour a bit more.
We'll need a render with better lighting to really give better critique. But as it stands, just look at your original reference for areas to improve.