Great job so far! Some suggestions - add tileable weld strips at major structural points - think about potential points where this would come into contact with other things/ppl/etc and add details according to those use/abuse cases EX: where the chain sits, you'd likely have a lot more rusted exposed metal and worn away paint b/c of the chains constantly rubbing in that area - handles might dirt/grime build up from dirty construction hands - your brass gauge and fittings dont read correctly, maybe your spec colour is off? - wheels are nice, but look too new - too many colours going on at the top (green, blue, blue, red, red/white, yellow, and shades of those) unify and simplify the colours - remove the geo extrusions on the pressure gauge, this looks silly - when tipped to maneuver, the cylinders will press/fall back again the yellow support bracket, and because the cylinders arent 'locked in place' and a free, they would be likely to move around, bounce around, so you'd see more damage on that specific part of the cylinders above/below that yellow support bracket.
I do like how subtle you are, and intentional with the scuffs/damage, and its not everywhere.
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Some suggestions
- add tileable weld strips at major structural points
- think about potential points where this would come into contact with other things/ppl/etc and add details according to those use/abuse cases
EX: where the chain sits, you'd likely have a lot more rusted exposed metal and worn away paint b/c of the chains constantly rubbing in that area
- handles might dirt/grime build up from dirty construction hands
- your brass gauge and fittings dont read correctly, maybe your spec colour is off?
- wheels are nice, but look too new
- too many colours going on at the top (green, blue, blue, red, red/white, yellow, and shades of those) unify and simplify the colours
- remove the geo extrusions on the pressure gauge, this looks silly
- when tipped to maneuver, the cylinders will press/fall back again the yellow support bracket, and because the cylinders arent 'locked in place' and a free, they would be likely to move around, bounce around, so you'd see more damage on that specific part of the cylinders above/below that yellow support bracket.
I do like how subtle you are, and intentional with the scuffs/damage, and its not everywhere.
I will try to implement them for my next study.