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Want feedback on composition(feel like this stage is about to be completed)

AbhiMahant
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  • Ashervisalis
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    Ashervisalis grand marshal polycounter
    The stump, the flat rocks, and the circular thing are all oval objects competing for attention in the same spot of the image. I think your horizon line is a little boring atm. You could use more foreground foliage. You've got an epic bridge leading to a circular slab on the ground... I think the composition could be vastly improved. What are you trying to accomplish? What do you want me to look at? Bridges and stairs and paths are great at leading the eye, but your paths are in awkward parts of the image, and my eye is currently being led to the circular slab, which is in the very bottom left of the image, which feels very weird.
  • AbhiMahant
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    AbhiMahant polycounter lvl 3
    focal point is not seen in the picture, it's god rays falling on the bridge(at around 20 angle), foliage is very less currently, in the end it's supposed to be a overgrown level.
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