Its looks nice to me, the shoulders, arms, hips movement from the beginning are a bit exaggerated in my opinion, as someone whos running doesn't really move that much, those movements resemble more someone whos speed jogging (i don't know if that's the name of the sport that Hal does in Malcom in the middle lol).
that's the only odd thing in my eyes, maybe playing with the tempo can help you create more dynamism in the animation, spedding up a bit the moment he touches ground and slowing down the highest point in the jump arch, i dont know... im not an animator, so take my advise with caution, but hope that helps.
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that's the only odd thing in my eyes, maybe playing with the tempo can help you create more dynamism in the animation, spedding up a bit the moment he touches ground and slowing down the highest point in the jump arch, i dont know...
im not an animator, so take my advise with caution, but hope that helps.