Sci-Fi Trim Sheet Practice

b_beauchamp

Hi everyone, I just finished this sci-fi trim sheet as a practice project. I kept it pretty simple on purpose, basing it off of the popular "sci-fi corridor" designs seen around. I'm planning to add it to my portfolio, possibly with a couple of variations. I'd appreciate any feedback you may have. Thanks!

teodar23

Looks good but its too simple if you ask me. Needs more "history". Fine scratches, dirt accumulated in the crevices, rust, splats, etc. Also, you might want to break some of the repetition, its very noticeable and kinda defeats the purpose.

ZacD

Too much lighting drawn into the base color. Could use a lot more surface information. What is the surface? What are the details? Pipes? Seams? Handles? Padding? Storage?