You need to spend some time in MD. the clothing (particularly the trousers) have too little material to produce convincing folds and stretches. Perhaps fiddle with the pattern and use pins where the material falls too much.
Looks much better cool and yea stuff takes long but worth it if you can manage the time sink. I like this and i do not normally like this type of stuff. I do not know what FBC is maybe some story or something to help the viewer get the image you are trying to project to us might go a long way? Is it like m.i.b. and he flashes people, omg did you make a flasher ! he flashes people then flashes them again to forget what they just saw! you madlad!Thought i'd make this post a little more interesting.
Looks a lot better!
Yeah , it is crazy right now.