Realistic Female Portrait

AliArto

Hi this my latest personal project "female portrait"  looking for feedback to improve 
https://www.artstation.com/artwork/g2G6ZP

Temppe

Nice.

Though I think the proportions are not "realistic", as your thread title suggests. The canthal tilt is very exagerated and the zygomatic has too much volume. It looks like you did this on purpose though, to go for a stylised look instead of realistic.

I would also say the cloth material is the weakest part. Other than the cloth I like the rendering quality.

AliArto

Temppe 

thanks Temppe for the feedback i will try next time thanks again for taking your time ,

Eric Chadwick

Oooh "canthal tilt" I learned a new term, thanks Temppe.

Nice head, AliArto, though it is a bit disconcerting, makes her start to look "alien". I would suggest fixing this.
This is an exaggeration, but hopefully helps illustrate. It's a great model and render, but could be better.

shredde

Awesome! Great work and very compelling presentation  

BohSheh

Very nice face , I think another way to achieve the same tilt look with a much realistic eye is by faking it using eyeliner and mascara .

BagelHero

I think the tilt itself is within reason, but the curve of the eyelashes is exaggerating it There are other things making it appear stylised imho

MatheusDalla

Dude, amazing work.
Take a look at this project, it is a good reference for you if you're looking for realism.
https://www.artstation.com/artwork/OoPA2e

One of the things that stands out that need work is the hair, needs to be messier, with more frizz.
Also, the eye shape need more detail and deepness, especially on the eyelids.
All the shapes are a little too smooth, the skin needs some marks where it deforms more often.
Also a little more color variation. The eyes looks kinda white, lifeless...

Dont take me harsh, i couldnt do better. Just trying to help!

AliArto

Eric Chadwick said:

i know what you mean i can see it now thanks for the feedback Eric 


shredde said:

thanks shredde  

BohSheh said:

yes true i'll try in my next female project thanks BohSheh

BagelHero said:

i did the eye little bit bigger and i exaggerate other forms to make it looks beautiful , my next project will be better , thanks BagelHero for the feedback

MatheusDalla said:

i'll study it and see what it's makes it realistic  "Dont take me harsh" man i post my work here to take feedback i need to improve my skills i need it and you give it to me so thank you soo much Matheus i really appreciate it