teenage girl portrait

gene6ix

Hi everyone, here is my latest work. Learnt a lot and i hope to keep learning and pushing the envelope.
Modeled in zbrush, rendered in  v-ray for 3ds max, ornatrix for 3ds max for the hair, texturing in substance painter.
hope you like it. like to here what you guys think.
thanks

slosh

This turned out real nice!  I wish her glasses had lenses so you could see some nice reflection.

gene6ix

slosh said:

This turned out real nice!  I wish her glasses had lenses so you could see some nice reflection.

thanks @slosh i got lazy hahaha

Ashervisalis

Two critiques I have are her teeth are far too white, and her iris looks too big (though I'm not 100% sure on the iris). Looks good!

gene6ix

Ashervisalis said:

Two critiques I have are her teeth are far too white, and her iris looks too big (though I'm not 100% sure on the iris). Looks good!

thanks

carvuliero

Is this done or still open for suggestions ?

Just in case few random things  ::

- smile -> she look like the joker like that add a bit of bevel in the corners , shes young so such deep wrinkles are less likely to accrue  I suggest adding wider fall off at inner side of folds

- lose philtrum it disappear in smile

-her pores are crazy so maybe reduce normal map influence or add more SSS

-clavicle doesnt seem to have correct depth curvature

-optional increase size of incisors and give them stronger curvature both ways

-T-shirt is Noisy , why dont you try purple there is some chemistry between black girls and purple color

gene6ix

carvuliero said:

Is this done or still open for suggestions ?

Just in case few random things  ::

- smile -> she look like the joker like that add a bit of bevel in the corners , shes young so such deep wrinkles are less likely to accrue  I suggest adding wider fall off at inner side of folds

- lose philtrum it disappear in smile

-her pores are crazy so maybe reduce normal map influence or add more SSS

-clavicle doesnt seem to have correct depth curvature

-optional increase size of incisors and give them stronger curvature both ways

-T-shirt is Noisy , why dont you try purple there is some chemistry between black girls and purple color

it's actually done but thanks, nice points