It has been a while since i showed something so there she is, new project that im working on. She is going to be a full character after a concept but for now im focusing on finishing the head and hair before going further. If u have any suggestions feel free to share :P
https://www.artstation.com/pzielinski/blog/wpRD/new-project
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That is to ask, what is your workflow for it?
About the eyebrows, they're almost perfect. You might be able to get away without adding any planes by doing some minor adjustments to them. The main aspects making them look drawn on are the shape and density.
Eyebrows tend to arch towards that region (blue line) between temple and forehead whose name in English I don't know and I'm too lazy to google, heh. The catch is that even straight eyebrows will have a peak here (green). The peaks of your eyebrows instead are too far into the temples because their lower edge arches up without an accompanying raise at the top, making it read as if someone plucked everything out in a straight line there. Note that the peaks aren't solid, the majority of the time the hairs are pretty sparse there, softening their effect.
Your eyebrows are also uniformly dense as if she were a bit heavy-handed when filling them in with a pencil. The beginning of eyebrows (purple) has a vital role in making it look natural. It'll be 1. Sparse, gradually filling in; 2. Grow in initial direction of the nose-eye socket crest without following it all way to the tips, as in: The hair is projected in a straight path once it leaves the skin, so some will point up, others to the side with its curves being due the inherent properties of the hair (strand shape, clumping), not attempts to keep sticking to the emitter's topology; 3. Relatively shorter than the middle.
here are some wips
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I know its probably color grading at the photo place before distrubution but a little more saturation might help give it a little more life (for me) do as you wish, nice project you are hitting it on the head. (pun?) Either way i like it. I do not have an amazing monitor nor have i used the spyder device to get correct coloration profile on my monitor hope it looks good to all. Keep this in mind.
So im done with the head for now, please check her out
Rendered and fully textured in Marmoset 4. Hope you guys like her
more shots here : https://www.artstation.com/artwork/D5walG