Stylized semi-human girl

dannya795

Hey there! I'm starting to wrap up this sculpt and looking for some feedback before I paint. Mostly regarding her clothing design, facial structure, general quality, and anything else that stands out! thanks!

ChristheLancer97

This is a cool sculpt! I would say the back of the head needs a bit more smoothing but besides that I really like it I would personally stretch out the neck a bit, but thats just on my taste.

dannya795

Thanks for the suggestion! I'll play around with it!

dannya795

ChristheLancer97 said:

This is a cool sculpt! I would say the back of the head needs a bit more smoothing but besides that I really like it I would personally stretch out the neck a bit, but thats just on my taste.

Thanks for the suggestion! I'll play around with it!

JosephIV

Well, I'm not sure about it, it's an ET girl... The buttocks I think to be more rounds but not exaggerated. The hips are too rounds and up?, and the knees zone could be stylized.

Hope Its help you.

JohannesAg

Could just be my preference but there are a few things I would change in the face, the shape of the chin feels a bit wobly, the back of the neck and head goes too far back imo, the forehead sticks out a bit much for my liking and the nose could do with softer transitions as well as the ear. Also the lips seem a little pursed. I´m not much of a 2d artist but I tried my best at a paintover to explain.

dannya795

JohannesAg said:

Could just be my preference but there are a few things I would change in the face, the shape of the chin feels a bit wobly, the back of the neck and head goes too far back imo, the forehead sticks out a bit much for my liking and the nose could do with softer transitions as well as the ear. Also the lips seem a little pursed. I´m not much of a 2d artist but I tried my best at a paintover to explain.

Thank you! thats really helpful!