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(WIP) Raccoon Character Sculpt

Heya guys, this is my first time posting on here, so here it goes. I've been working on a Raccoon character in Zbrush as of late and I would like some feedback on it. Here is how it's looking so far.
It's a bit rough around the edges currently, but critique would be greatly appreciated. Cheers.

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  • Crazy_pixel
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    Funny idea, what is the story behind your character?

    In terms of critique, I noticed that you sculpted the folds for the pants with active symmetry,break the shapes and maybe try to make even harder cuts to create a stronger silhouette.

    But anyway, keep it up :)
  • sarasumm
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    Your overall proportions are looking nice! I'd suggest looking at more reference for pleated pants if you want to have that crisp line going down the legs. They should look folded and sewed under the beltline. I also agree with Crazy_pixel about breaking symmetry to sculpt folds.

    Looks cool so far!
  • EdwardJivkov

    Funny idea, what is the story behind your character?

    In terms of critique, I noticed that you sculpted the folds for the pants with active symmetry,break the shapes and maybe try to make even harder cuts to create a stronger silhouette.

    But anyway, keep it up :)
    I just thought giving a raccoon a boring office job was a fun concept.
    sarasumm said:
    Your overall proportions are looking nice! I'd suggest looking at more reference for pleated pants if you want to have that crisp line going down the legs. They should look folded and sewed under the beltline. I also agree with Crazy_pixel about breaking symmetry to sculpt folds.

    Looks cool so far!
    As for the pointers, I'll definitely go back and work on the cloth some more, pleats and all. The symmetric folds were supposed to be temporary thing and they kinda stuck. I'll make sure to get some nice reference for it.

    Cheers, guys.


  • EdwardJivkov
    Funny idea, what is the story behind your character?

    In terms of critique, I noticed that you sculpted the folds for the pants with active symmetry,break the shapes and maybe try to make even harder cuts to create a stronger silhouette.

    But anyway, keep it up :)
    I thought it would be fun concept to give a raccoon a day-job.
    sarasumm said:
    Your overall proportions are looking nice! I'd suggest looking at more reference for pleated pants if you want to have that crisp line going down the legs. They should look folded and sewed under the beltline. I also agree with Crazy_pixel about breaking symmetry to sculpt folds.

    Looks cool so far!
    As for the feedback, I'll definitely work on the cloth some more and look at more reference on the matter. The symmetry was supposed to be a temporary thing but it kinda stuck till the end. Cheers guys.

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