I like this a lot! What does your texture sheet look like? Curious if you reused any parts or if it's uniquely unwrapped.
The bottom kind of doesn't make sense, it should probably be a disc of wood, with the slats squeezing up against it. Right now the bottom makes it look like the whole thing was carved from a single block of wood.
The leather wrapping on the handle seems like it could be thicker. Imagine the metal handle keeps going under them... so then how thin are those strips?
I like this a lot! What does your texture sheet look like? Curious if you reused any parts or if it's uniquely unwrapped.
The bottom kind of doesn't make sense, it should probably be a disc of wood, with the slats squeezing up against it. Right now the bottom makes it look like the whole thing was carved from a single block of wood.
The leather wrapping on the handle seems like it could be thicker. Imagine the metal handle keeps going under them... so then how thin are those strips?
I love the detailing, very nicely done.
Thank you for your feedback! It has a unique unwrap. )
It's so good to hear some critique and advice from experienced artists like you. Next time I'll try to think about things like you say about. And sorry about my English, not is my native.
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The bottom kind of doesn't make sense, it should probably be a disc of wood, with the slats squeezing up against it. Right now the bottom makes it look like the whole thing was carved from a single block of wood.
The leather wrapping on the handle seems like it could be thicker. Imagine the metal handle keeps going under them... so then how thin are those strips?
I love the detailing, very nicely done.