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Tantive IV - Star Wars Fanart

DerMalt
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Hey Ho, 
It took me forever, but I'm finally done. Here is the Tantive IV I've modelled in 3D. 
I tried to keep it as close as possible to the original model. 


For more renders, check out my Artstation: 
https://www.artstation.com/artwork/GXA12N

Wireframe:
https://www.artstation.com/artwork/4bD1y2




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  • Pirax
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    Hey man, the models you've made is fantastic, really great detail and you can see the effort you've put in. 

    What i will say is i think that the environment render is letting it down, the image is a bit washed out and its not translating the detail you've put in to the viewer. To fix this I'd probably look to re-render it making the background more contrasty.

    https://www.geekvilleradio.com/wp-content/uploads/2019/11/mandalorian-chapter-2.jpg 

    If you look at some of the desert planets - one above is from the mandalorian you can reference your light and see where it differs. 

    In addition to this some close up shots are really necessary - visuals of the cables at the back or bits you know took you along time to do are really useful to show off. 

    Hope this feedback helps, great work!
  • Polynaught
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    Also: scale.

    Most probably know that this is a corvette sized ship. But nothing really indicates it. Some vehicles on the ground next to it, some people standing by and hinting at a person watching over this scenery from the ledge would help to put the viewer into perspective.
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