Art critique!

MattAllum12 · Apr 2020

Hello fellow very knowledge artists of the world.. I'm looking for some critique on the lighting mainly and 1 other thing, achieving really good grungy windows! Composition wise I want those eyes to be drawn immediately to the blue light, be great to get a second set of eyes on this. Suggestions on those windows also would be great!, simple grunge alpha planes maybe? Still heavily wip

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Ashervisalis · Apr 2020

The global lighting in the concept has a desaturated brown tone, whereas the lamp has a saturated blue tone. I would also turn down the godrays from the window, it seems more like a bloom effect in the concept. Window grunge could just be done as a grunge map dropped on the opacity of the glass material. Looking good so far

MattAllum12 · Apr 2020

Thanks for the pointers!

Art critique!

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