Spaceship Scene.

Mattrobe

I have created this scene within unreal. currently looking for feedback with lighting/composition mainly however any criticism is welcome. I am currently trying to follow some reference images of museum lighting for aircrafts. (will upload) 

Here is where Im currently at. the ship itself is inspired by the Sabre Fighter from Halo Reach. 





here are my reference images towards lighting

if you want to take a look at the low poly its below 
for some general critique


Highpoly Wireframe
I tried to keep to the geometry simple and use Normal stamps to create the paneling in areas amongst other detail. 

Brian "Panda" Choi

Floor should have more roughness noise and variance like the space shuttle photograph's hangar floor.

Mattrobe

Thanks for the feedback ! I will update soon  

Mattrobe

What do you reckon on this. I have a master material with some parameters to adjust a roughness mask.   

Ashervisalis

Yo, I love the jet! You've done an awesome job and any crit from me is just nitpicking. Check out my draw over. Shouldnt have used blue writing, sorry hahaha

Your edges look a bit weird but it could be the resolution of the image. Regarding the lighting, I feel you could darken the background a little bit.

Mattrobe

Thank you so much, it really helps, I will get on this feedback and update  

Mattrobe

So I cant really change the normal stamps on the engine or the model itself until later on. however ive got some more adjustments 


I've adjusted the height of the pillars and the geometry in the Railings. added more roughness in the pillars and walls aswell. I've tried to adjust the brightness and bloom coming off of the ship in the first camera angle Maybe the walls have too much bloom ? 

Ashervisalis

Lookin class!