The area right above the eye and close to the nose looks weird in this one. Almost like she has a second eye lid.
You are making progress. If i could recommend something: please download this mesh from Vimal's gumroad linked on this post: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/VkvDN. Open up this FREE asset and STUDY it in your own zbrush. Studying masterworks like this with a very keen eye will improve your skills. Hell even try copying it from dynamesh sphere just for studies sake if you'd like....