mark zhang concept art and sketches

markzhangdesign

Hi all,


I am Mark Zhang, a concept designer. Here are some of my works and exercises...  all critiques are appreciated . 

bed

Hey Mark, this is awesome stuff!! It shows you have a great sense of hard surface design, and your finished renders have a nice level of polish.

My only critique (and I had to really try to find something..) would be for the panoramic shot with the long alien worm creature. For me too many elements are pointing left and out of frame. Perhaps you could flip the figure with the dolly, and the one with the tablet computer, have her resting against the side of the pipes facing into frame, bouncing some of that blue light back onto the creatures face, forcing our eyes back into frame to circle around again.

Not sure if my description was clear enough, so I did you a quick paintover. Keep up the great work!

markzhangdesign

bed said:

Hey Mark, this is awesome stuff!! It shows you have a great sense of hard surface design, and your finished renders have a nice level of polish.

My only critique (and I had to really try to find something..) would be for the panoramic shot with the long alien worm creature. For me too many elements are pointing left and out of frame. Perhaps you could flip the figure with the dolly, and the one with the tablet computer, have her resting against the side of the pipes facing into frame, bouncing some of that blue light back onto the creatures face, forcing our eyes back into frame to circle around again.

Not sure if my description was clear enough, so I did you a quick paintover. Keep up the great work!

I didn't pay much attention to these things. thanks so much, I guess I just did things too instinctively. Much appreciated again man.