Overall the clothing is looking wonderful, but I'm not quite sure what the material on her chest is supposed to be (the grey parts) it looks like it is kind of a rougher iron in the concept, but it's really non-descript in the material definition you gave it. I think the skin could use some work too, it's feeling kinda splotchy and is lacking in color zones. I think the makeup could use a bit of work too, lips should be shinier and the eyeshadow should be more of a gradient instead of a flat color. Here is a paintover to help you out, the makeup reference isn't exact but it should give you some ideas
Here is a video to check out to help you with the skin
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