Hey everyone! I'm an environment artist looking to break my way into the industry. I've just finished a personal project for my portfolio and I'm hoping to get some feedback. I've been working on it for quite some time, and I'm always looking to improve. Everything was made from scratch by myself.
Hey, Just wanted to say this looks great your models are on point!
As far as critiques, they thing that stood out the most to me was the shadows. i could see a few objects without shadows, but the most noticeable was directly under the table. the pool table light is reflecting off the floor. Maybe check your lighting, and size of the lights, just some small tweeks.
Hey, Just wanted to say this looks great your models are on point!
As far as critiques, they thing that stood out the most to me was the shadows. i could see a few objects without shadows, but the most noticeable was directly under the table. the pool table light is reflecting off the floor. Maybe check your lighting, and size of the lights, just some small tweeks.
Thank you! I'll go in a try to fix these thing. Will be updating soon.
Hey man. looks great I really like the mood and lighting, however like the guy above said some objects are missing contact shadows like the pipes. The pipes also look way to clean for me, they could use some rust and roughness var.
Tried to add better shading to the objects on the pool table, added more grime to pipes/walls, and added bricks to the corners to remove the hard edge. I also added more blood to the sheet to match the blood on the pool table.
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As far as critiques, they thing that stood out the most to me was the shadows. i could see a few objects without shadows, but the most noticeable was directly under the table. the pool table light is reflecting off the floor. Maybe check your lighting, and size of the lights, just some small tweeks.
The pipes also look way to clean for me, they could use some rust and roughness var.
Really cool piece overall