Where I get stuck when I don't start with linework, advice appreciated :)

EVF

Work In Progress 

 I didn't start with line work. I'm at the point where I start muddying things up, going over and over what is there without improving on it at all, even worsening it (for example where the center waterfall meets the cliff). 

3 layers:

•  foreground cliff/stairs
• character
• bg environment (had 1 overlay and 1 multiply layers, merged with it at this point) 

I could just keep doing what I do and start with linework, but I am curious about the straight to broad brush and then refine process even for a situation where establishing a (few) quick mood/compositions over a few hours of work is necessary, . (when there is no time to finish a sketch and do a full render)

Maybe I'm just overthinking things, maybe working with more layers would be the solution in controlling my edges and atmosphere.

Let me now your opinion/experience!

EVF

where it's at, and I think studying Marco Bucci and watching his tutorials would be the best thing to do to improve these types of paintings...


thanks for viewing

mistasierra

I don't think you have enough contrast between your foreground and background. Temporarily turn it to grey scale and that should give you a better idea of it's contrast. What I would do is darken and lessen the detail of the foreground. And focus the detail on the castle. Great atmosphere though!

EVF

@mistasierra hey! thanks for the feedback I'll try it out for sure! silhouetting the fg is a great idea!