Please Critique my portfolio? (Amateur Artist)

blipbloo

So I just finished school and I want to work on becoming a concept artist, except I have no idea how to build a portfolio that would make someone want to hire me... All I have is my school portfolio
I am aware that my portfolio isn't the greatest and I am tired of always being embarrassed about it so I would really like any advice/critique I can to get make it better. 

What works? What doesn't work?
How can I make my work more appealing?
What do I need to improve on to get a job?
etc... 

https://www.artstation.com/ddruanruan

No need to pull any punches. I'll take what I can get.  

Doodlok

Your link seems to be down, it gives me error message..

blipbloo

Doodlok said:

Your link seems to be down, it gives me error message..

so sorry about that! I recently just changed my username and I forgot to update the links. Thank you for catching that!

Mehran Khan

Hi,
Here is a good resource on how to go about how to gear your folio to make your folio attractive.
http://gameartmentor.com/

blipbloo

Mehran Khan said:

Hi,
Here is a good resource on how to go about how to gear your folio to make your folio attractive.
http://gameartmentor.com/

thanks!! I appreciate the tip!!