Michi´s improvmentthread

Ketchup13

Hi, 

my first post in this Forum, yay!

So this is my Dragon. I´m planning to pose, texture and render it in the upcoming days/weeks. Maybe if it turns out well I´ll 3dprint it too.

I´d love to hear your feedback/comments on this!

Ketchup13

Here is the moodboard

Ashervisalis

Hey Ketchup, sick looking dragon! The wings look a bit low poly/un-smoothed at the moment, so I'm assuming they're unfinished? I've highlighted a few bits that stick out on the wings. I'd also revisit how the wings integrate with the main body, as right now it looks like the mesh of the wing is just intersecting with the body mesh.

polygons

adding onto what ash said i think some of the muscles could do with a bit of subtle smoothing on a lower subdivision level so they look a but more natural. its coming along nicely though

Ketchup13

Awesome feedback!

@Ashervisalis good point with the winginsertion to the body and the overallook of the wings.

@polygons the muscledef is too much, I´ll work on that too thank you guys!