Pirate Girl [WIP]

ashraful mobin

First block. Facing difficulty with her face! Any C&C is most welcome.
Concept is taken from Anna Maystrenko's sketch.

Skinner3D

I feel like the proportions are off across the model. I think they are too thin. She seems like a more solid stylized body rather than a super model stylized. You have the front profile of the face pretty good. The chin however is too pointy. The highlights in the art show softer curves.

ashraful mobin

Thanks a lot Skinner3D, I really appreciate your feedback. Please keep giving more critique.
Here is an update.

Skinner3D

Distinctly better.

ashraful mobin

Thanks Skinner3D

ashraful mobin

Update: worked on the face. Specially eyes and lips.

Couple of references from internet helped me a lot to understand the anatomy.

Alemja

Cool concept choice, and nice start! This thing that immediately stands out to me is that you are trying to make the face shape in a straight on view based on the concept where the head is tilted up. This is skewing the proportions of your chin and lower lip quite a bit. The chin/jaw should be a little longer and the lower lip more full, As the face gets more tilted up, the jaw line kind of straightens and the lower lip becomes less visible.

To double check, I would try to make a render of the face in roughly the same position as the head and see how it looks.

hope this helps!

ashraful mobin

Thanks a lot Alemja! Your notes are very helpful.

ashraful mobin

Update: worked on the body proportion, face, cap, hair and cloth.

supremedalek925

It’s looking a lot better now. I do think the cheeks look a bit chubby relative to the overall proportions, like she’s got acorns stuffed in there.

ashraful mobin

Thanks a lot supremedalek925! I will definitely check the cheeks
Here is another update. Worked mainly on the muscles.

This is the reference I followed to achieve the rhythm.

ashraful mobin

Update: worked on T-pose and cloths